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Depth of My Soul

the depth of my soul feeds my intellect- for I’m always lost, craving to connect visceral woe shines, like an ebon gem- such cynical fear… my care does condemn ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 11.15.19 Contest - McWhirtle Me Sponsor - Charles Messina

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/26/2019 2:23:00 PM

very well crafted LuLoo, Many congratulations on your win, I hope you had a wonderful Christmas with Nick and Ella:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina

Date: 12/24/2019 10:10:00 AM

Another great write from your sparkling pen, LU. Congratulations on your win. Happy Holidays.. Charlie

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/26/2019 8:27:00 AM

Excellent, thought-provoking piece, Lu Loo! Janice

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/19/2019 8:31:00 PM

Lovely poem, LuLoo.

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/17/2019 3:31:00 PM

very nicely penned, i am not sure what the structure is for the form, i never heard of it, but i love the content of yours... best wishes in the contest! :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2019 1:44:00 PM

You have written a very good one, LuLoo. I can't believe I never heard of this form before I saw people writing them today.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/15/2019 11:37:00 PM

This is wonderful, dear Laura. I love it. God bless you with love, Gina

Lu Loo
Date: 11/16/2019 1:51:00 PM

thank you so much lovely RR! x:-)-luloo

Chris Green

Date: 11/15/2019 1:58:00 PM

Really nicely done my friend. The second McWhirtle I've read today and I still don't know what a McWhirtle is. Do they come with a drink and fries? : )

Lu Loo
Date: 11/16/2019 1:51:00 PM

I have no clue either! lollol I just read the description and got more confused! I basically followed pattern of everyone else I guess. Oh well, hope I got it right :) thanks dear Chris x:-)-luloo