Beautiful Scars Poet McWhirtle

Depth of My Soul

the depth of my soul
feeds my intellect-
for I’m always lost,
craving to connect

visceral woe shines, 
like an ebon gem-
such cynical fear…
my care does condemn

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11.15.19
Contest - McWhirtle Me
Sponsor - Charles Messina

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Jan Allison December 26, 2019 at 2:23 PM very well crafted LuLoo, Many congratulations on your win, I hope you had a wonderful Christmas with Nick and Ella:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina December 24, 2019 at 10:10 AM Another great write from your sparkling pen, LU. Congratulations on your win. Happy Holidays.. Charlie

Janice Canerdy November 26, 2019 at 8:27 AM Excellent, thought-provoking piece, Lu Loo! Janice

Line Gauthier November 19, 2019 at 8:31 PM Lovely poem, LuLoo.

Sandra Adams November 17, 2019 at 3:31 PM very nicely penned, i am not sure what the structure is for the form, i never heard of it, but i love the content of yours... best wishes in the contest! :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich November 17, 2019 at 1:44 PM You have written a very good one, LuLoo. I can't believe I never heard of this form before I saw people writing them today.

Regina Mcintosh November 15, 2019 at 11:37 PM This is wonderful, dear Laura. I love it. God bless you with love, Gina Beautiful Scars November 16, 2019 at 1:51 PM thank you so much lovely RR! x:-)-luloo

Chris Green November 15, 2019 at 1:58 PM Really nicely done my friend. The second McWhirtle I've read today and I still don't know what a McWhirtle is. Do they come with a drink and fries? : ) Beautiful Scars November 16, 2019 at 1:51 PM I have no clue either! lollol I just read the description and got more confused! I basically followed pattern of everyone else I guess. Oh well, hope I got it right :) thanks dear Chris x:-)-luloo