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Depth of Love

She trembled at my intent...
Bodies clinging, we swam fathoms deep
surrendering to each other as eternal lovers
passionately torrid...  reverently tender



June 2, 2021
Liberum Divisa 6 Contest
Sponsor: Gregory Barden
Lines from 'How Sweet the Bloom of Love'

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Ultimate Spectator Date: 9/23/2021 12:41:00 AM i was wondering if its that good , then I realized it's four lines and i wanted to read more. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 9/23/2021 1:18:00 PM Your remarks are the ultimate compliment. Thank you very much.

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 8/29/2021 12:46:00 PM Wonderful romantic lines. Congrats on your top win Jenna. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 9/23/2021 1:18:00 PM Thanks so much, Jeanne.

Ken Rone Date: 8/28/2021 11:20:00 AM I love your work on which you snipped the verse. A very deserving win. My congratiltions. You waited out the results which was agonizing for me. I nearly wirhdrew. I wander if anyone did. Your use of vocabulary is inspiring. - Ken Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 9/23/2021 1:17:00 PM Thank you, Ken. Your comments are greatly appreciated.

Sam Kauffman Date: 8/28/2021 9:12:00 AM Very romantic and quite sensual Jenna! Well done. Congratulations on your trophy win. All the best. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 9/23/2021 1:16:00 PM Thanks, Sam.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/28/2021 8:46:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story in a four line write. Few words with much said. Have a blessed day/weekend................ Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 9/23/2021 1:16:00 PM Thanks, Paula.

Joanna Daniel Date: 8/28/2021 2:09:00 AM Fantastic four lines, Jenna, congratulations on trophy win:) Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 9/23/2021 1:16:00 PM Thanks, Jo.

Unseeking Seeker Date: 8/27/2021 8:23:00 PM Another level! Congrats on your top win, Jenna Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 9/23/2021 1:16:00 PM What a great comment! Thanks!!

Victor Buhagiar Date: 6/2/2021 7:20:00 AM Quite romantic in its conception. Best for a win. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 9/23/2021 1:15:00 PM Thank you.

Mark Koplin Date: 6/2/2021 5:08:00 AM Powerful lines my friend! A great entry indeed, well placed. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 6/2/2021 5:15:00 AM Good morning, Mark. Thank you for the kind comments. They're appreciated.

Tom Cunningham Date: 6/2/2021 3:35:00 AM A stanza that stands alone Jenna, two lovers entwined in a passionate embrace captured well in your stanza. Hope alls well and good luck in the contest. Enjoy your week. Tom Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 6/2/2021 3:50:00 AM Good morning, Tom, and thank you for liking these lines. I am fine and all is well in my world. Traveling to visit family members is wonderful after not seeing them for so long, but returning home is always nice. I hope you've been well.