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Depth of Love

She trembled at my intent... Bodies clinging, we swam fathoms deep surrendering to each other as eternal lovers passionately torrid... reverently tender June 2, 2021 Liberum Divisa 6 Contest Sponsor: Gregory Barden Lines from 'How Sweet the Bloom of Love'

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Ultimate Spectator

Date: 9/23/2021 12:41:00 AM

i was wondering if its that good , then I realized it's four lines and i wanted to read more.

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/23/2021 1:18:00 PM

Your remarks are the ultimate compliment. Thank you very much.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/29/2021 12:46:00 PM

Wonderful romantic lines. Congrats on your top win Jenna.

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/23/2021 1:18:00 PM

Thanks so much, Jeanne.

Ken Rone

Date: 8/28/2021 11:20:00 AM

I love your work on which you snipped the verse. A very deserving win. My congratiltions. You waited out the results which was agonizing for me. I nearly wirhdrew. I wander if anyone did. Your use of vocabulary is inspiring. - Ken

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/23/2021 1:17:00 PM

Thank you, Ken. Your comments are greatly appreciated.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/28/2021 9:12:00 AM

Very romantic and quite sensual Jenna! Well done. Congratulations on your trophy win. All the best.

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/23/2021 1:16:00 PM

Thanks, Sam.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/28/2021 8:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story in a four line write. Few words with much said. Have a blessed day/weekend................

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/23/2021 1:16:00 PM

Thanks, Paula.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/28/2021 2:09:00 AM

Fantastic four lines, Jenna, congratulations on trophy win:)

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/23/2021 1:16:00 PM

Thanks, Jo.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 8/27/2021 8:23:00 PM

Another level! Congrats on your top win, Jenna

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/23/2021 1:16:00 PM

What a great comment! Thanks!!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/2/2021 7:20:00 AM

Quite romantic in its conception. Best for a win.

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/23/2021 1:15:00 PM

Thank you.

Mark Koplin

Date: 6/2/2021 5:08:00 AM

Powerful lines my friend! A great entry indeed, well placed.

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/2/2021 5:15:00 AM

Good morning, Mark. Thank you for the kind comments. They're appreciated.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/2/2021 3:35:00 AM

A stanza that stands alone Jenna, two lovers entwined in a passionate embrace captured well in your stanza. Hope alls well and good luck in the contest. Enjoy your week. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/2/2021 3:50:00 AM

Good morning, Tom, and thank you for liking these lines. I am fine and all is well in my world. Traveling to visit family members is wonderful after not seeing them for so long, but returning home is always nice. I hope you've been well.