Jenna Logan Poet Free verse

Depth of Love

She trembled at my intent...
Bodies clinging, we swam fathoms deep
surrendering to each other as eternal lovers
passionately torrid...  reverently tender



June 2, 2021
Liberum Divisa 6 Contest
Sponsor: Gregory Barden
Lines from 'How Sweet the Bloom of Love'

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Ultimate Spectator September 23, 2021 at 12:41 AM i was wondering if its that good , then I realized it's four lines and i wanted to read more. Jenna Logan September 23, 2021 at 1:18 PM Your remarks are the ultimate compliment. Thank you very much.

Jeanne Mcgee August 29, 2021 at 12:46 PM Wonderful romantic lines. Congrats on your top win Jenna. Jenna Logan September 23, 2021 at 1:18 PM Thanks so much, Jeanne.

Ken Rone August 28, 2021 at 11:20 AM I love your work on which you snipped the verse. A very deserving win. My congratiltions. You waited out the results which was agonizing for me. I nearly wirhdrew. I wander if anyone did. Your use of vocabulary is inspiring. - Ken Jenna Logan September 23, 2021 at 1:17 PM Thank you, Ken. Your comments are greatly appreciated.

Sam Kauffman August 28, 2021 at 9:12 AM Very romantic and quite sensual Jenna! Well done. Congratulations on your trophy win. All the best. Jenna Logan September 23, 2021 at 1:16 PM Thanks, Sam.

Paula Goldsmith August 28, 2021 at 8:46 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story in a four line write. Few words with much said. Have a blessed day/weekend................ Jenna Logan September 23, 2021 at 1:16 PM Thanks, Paula.

Joanna Daniel August 28, 2021 at 2:09 AM Fantastic four lines, Jenna, congratulations on trophy win:) Jenna Logan September 23, 2021 at 1:16 PM Thanks, Jo.

Unseeking Seeker August 27, 2021 at 8:23 PM Another level! Congrats on your top win, Jenna Jenna Logan September 23, 2021 at 1:16 PM What a great comment! Thanks!!

Victor Buhagiar June 2, 2021 at 7:20 AM Quite romantic in its conception. Best for a win. Jenna Logan September 23, 2021 at 1:15 PM Thank you.

Mark Koplin June 2, 2021 at 5:08 AM Powerful lines my friend! A great entry indeed, well placed. Jenna Logan June 2, 2021 at 5:15 AM Good morning, Mark. Thank you for the kind comments. They're appreciated.

Tom Cunningham June 2, 2021 at 3:35 AM A stanza that stands alone Jenna, two lovers entwined in a passionate embrace captured well in your stanza. Hope alls well and good luck in the contest. Enjoy your week. Tom Jenna Logan June 2, 2021 at 3:50 AM Good morning, Tom, and thank you for liking these lines. I am fine and all is well in my world. Traveling to visit family members is wonderful after not seeing them for so long, but returning home is always nice. I hope you've been well.