Depth of a Man

(During contemplation)
What are we? Thought the flea,
there must be more than what we see.

(With careful consideration)
Am I free? Thought the bee,
and is there much aside from thee.

(Before deep meditation)
Who holds the key? Thought the manatee,
pondering while in the sea.

(With loving admiration)
How can this be? Thought the tree,
that so much life depends on me.


(With limited cognition)
What’s on T.V.? Asked he to she,
then walked off to take a pee.
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Agustin Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 1:43 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 6:06 PM
Hello Lee Bates,I like the way you created this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
Payne Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 2:46 PM
I like it. It was cleverly written. It was catchy. I like how it ended. It was funny. great job. Thanks for sharing,
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 11:42 PM
This is awesome :))
Gauthier Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 7:21 PM
Wow - what an awesome witty poem. Love the contrast along this clever hierarchy of intelligence. A definite FAVE for me.
Canerdy Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 12:38 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Love that last stanza! Janice
Allison Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 11:56 AM
Absolutely loved this fabulous rhyme Lee my fave one is the final one which made me giggle. many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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