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Depth Charge

Away, away, yet bound for love And what, this hindrance hounding still For feelings left but unexpressed I hold back, yet against my will And though I voyage in my search I touch but what the surface knows Afraid to plunge into the deep Exploding as this feeling grows But forge ahead and not hold back I must if love is to be found To reach my destination and to not again run ship aground Remembering as a youth, the fear of unrequited love

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Christina Bowring

Date: 10/15/2023 1:02:00 PM

Loved this poem Mike which many can so easily relate to. The poem flows so well, so well expressed with great rhyming. Unrequited love can be so devastating and yet courage is needed, hope in your heart too, if true love is to be discovered. Your poem of uncertainty yet strength and believe to surge ahead regardless is so beautifully captured here. Thank you Mike. :):)

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/20/2023 4:39:00 AM

Thank you so much Christina!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/12/2023 12:06:00 PM

- We shall not fear love ... he who does not dare ... nothing wins ... a sensitive poem, Mike :) - hugs

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/13/2023 4:04:00 AM

So very true !! Thank you and Happy Friday xxoo

The Situation

Date: 10/12/2023 11:49:00 AM

I understand compleatly.I related to the metaphore.

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/13/2023 4:04:00 AM

Thank you so much, I am so glad that it resonates with you !!

Charles Messina

Date: 10/10/2023 4:17:00 AM

You are a master of rhyme, Mike. This touching write really hits home with me. Hope all is well, my friend. Happy Tuesday!

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/12/2023 11:44:00 AM

Thank you so much Charlie !!

Deb M

Date: 10/9/2023 3:00:00 PM

Another heart toucher Mike….! Debx

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/12/2023 11:44:00 AM

Thank you Deb xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2023 1:27:00 PM

wow, Deep one and very well crafted, Mike

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/12/2023 11:43:00 AM

Thank you Andrea xxoo

Ink Empress

Date: 10/6/2023 10:40:00 PM

The fear of unrequited love is deep and real! Especially as you’ve mentioned here too “ For feelings left but unexpressed I hold back, yet against my will” so many words unsaid feelings unexpressed! And you’ve written about it so well. I really felt “I must if love is to be found” i felt this poem deeply! Hits home

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/7/2023 5:40:00 AM

I am so glad that it resonated with you! Thank you so much xxoo

Silent One

Date: 10/6/2023 11:11:00 AM

My dear friend, sometimes i feel you writing from my heart.. many will relate to your poem as they have been through the same.. You expressed it so well.. Have a great weekend.

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/6/2023 11:44:00 AM

Silent One, thank you for your always kind comments!!! A happy weekend to you as well!!!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/6/2023 10:55:00 AM

A wonderful write/story. Love is wasted on the young. Happy Friday... Have a wonderful day/weekend....................

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/6/2023 11:44:00 AM

Thank you Paula xxoo

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/6/2023 8:36:00 AM

Who has not experienced unrequited love? It's a phase we must pass through. Great poem. Blessings.

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/6/2023 11:43:00 AM

Thank you so much Victor!

Bill Baker

Date: 10/6/2023 7:58:00 AM

Those holdover feelings from unrequited love or rejection can play havoc with us as adults, Mike. I liked your poem, well rhymed, my friend. Have a great weekend! Bill

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/6/2023 11:43:00 AM

Thank you Bill, a happy weekend to you as well !!

Tom Woody

Date: 10/6/2023 7:56:00 AM

Perfect cadence, which isn't easy. Unrequited love is the saddest of all, whether it's one sided or the two have impossible circumstances. Awesome poem

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/6/2023 11:43:00 AM

Thank you so much Tom!!