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Placed First in : Deprived of Your Love ...Poetry Contest  of Anoucheka Gangabissoon

 


                                         Deprived of Your Love

                         Deprived of Your love since the dawn of time
                                O Lord, I wander in wild wilderness
                               As as I committed a villainous crime
                              That ignited the fire of Your wildness.

                                Seduced by a sly slithering serpent
                           I yielded to charms of the outlawed fruit,
                             My mind turned to a welter of torment
                              Urging me my burning feelings to suit.

                              Now ejected from Your sacred garden
                                     I roam in forests of desolation
                          With thirst, hunger, fear and despair smitten,
                                 Without any dim hope for salvation.

                              I have to fight against beasts of all kinds
                                     For survival of the very fittest
                           Against wilful wild winds and rains combined
                           Against snow frost, cold as never witnessed.

                               At times I have to battle with my kind
                           To pinch, plunder and pocket nature`s gift
                               Without any twinge or an axe to grind
                          And often with my own peers to wedge a rift.

                            At last drawn down with deadening despair
                             At Your shrine I pray for Your forgiveness
                               For Your leniency, mercy, love and care
                                 As sinful son to Father with kindness.

                            Filled with the shining light of compassion
                               Moved by the milk of mercy, as Father
                             You launch to earth Your only divine Son
                              To teach every man to live as brothers.

                       Though nailed on the cross from His head to toes
                         Your Son forgives the shrewd sly scornful hands,
                     Though flagged and stamped with sores on His body
                           He absolves those who spike a divine man.

                                  Now I am turning over a new leaf,
                             Repent and cleanse my soul life after life
                      Wipe my self tainted with the tan of towering grief
                         And scour my spirits soiled with seams of strife.

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Date: 6/7/2025 2:52:00 PM
A wonderful testimony to the love and grace of God! Congratulations! Xo
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 6/8/2025 12:49:00 AM
Thank you poet friend for appreciating the poem and your kind wishes. Sending you the blessings of light.

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