Depressive Fog

Darkness surrounds me
I reside in a black cloud
That brings me closer
To death descending into
a dungeon I can't escape
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 30, 2009 at 3:16 AM
Love how well thought out your works are, this is in great Tanka form 5-7-5-7-7 !Well done! Thankyou so much for your kind comments....Anna-Marie.
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