Vickie Hurtt - Thayer Poet Rhyme

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DEPRESSION, ANXIETY, PTSD..,ALWAYS A FIGHT, ALWAYS A BATTLE, GOOD SOLDIERS ARE WE. ~VICKIE THAYER~      

Depression's Black Eye

THERE'S A RAINBOW HIDDEN INSIDE MY TEARS, 

MY EYES LOOK FOR A POT OF GOLD,

AT THE END OF EVERY CRY, 

BUT THE BLACK CLOUD ABOVE ME, 

ALWAYS PUNCHES ME IN THE EYE. 

        ~VICKIE THAYER~

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Tom Rutherford November 9, 2017 at 8:15 PM Vickie, such a deep potent verse and message with so few words. Well done! Vickie Hurtt - Thayer November 10, 2017 at 8:35 AM Tom, Your Kind, Thanks.

Silent One November 8, 2017 at 1:02 PM This is very clever poetry and you have written a deep write hidden behind metaphors.... Excellent.. Vickie Hurtt - Thayer November 9, 2017 at 6:19 PM Thanks, I Have Enjoyed Your Writings, Your So Very Well Versed. Hope Some Day To Be Better..Like You And So Many Others. Vickie

Arthur Vaso November 7, 2017 at 10:44 PM I know this very well, even at this very moment, so very well expressed. Vickie Hurtt - Thayer November 8, 2017 at 8:44 AM THANK YOU ARTHUR, HARD ONE FOR ME TO EXPRESS, NOT HARD TO FEEL. VICKIE