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Depressions

The feeling, an ache in the heart, in the soul. Drowning in front of everyone, they can see you. You try to speak but only cough, cough up the tears that fall into your mouth. You scream for help, but your screams fall to deaf ears. Help me! HELP ME! PLEASE! Please. I beg of you........ I need help......

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2016 12:42:00 PM

- Poetry: Music in words .... rhythmic expression of emotion, like the nectar of the bee, you are sharing here with us Alexander :) - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Moon Flower

Date: 6/4/2016 8:25:00 AM

Sorry about how you feel now (if that's what really is) Anyway, that's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Aleander. :)

Skat A

Date: 6/4/2016 12:36:00 AM

I hope you get the help you need. Alexander., Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/3/2016 11:38:00 PM

Alexander,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Probir Gupta

Date: 6/3/2016 10:20:00 PM

Scream out from the roof top and write out madly whatever there is in your mind....Enjoyed your poem...