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Depression On the Street

Walking down
The street
I’ve got blisters on my feet
Undoing my belt
The most pain I’ve ever felt
Hanging from a tree 
Is the perfect place for me
The urge is thriving 
The only worry is surviving

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/22/2009 2:43:00 PM
i like this one,^^ its like u can almost picture it, though with few words, excellent, tiff
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Date: 7/20/2009 5:05:00 PM
ah we all feel like that, especially in the midst of heartbreak - Steve stay in the moment.
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Date: 7/20/2009 5:51:00 AM
I think some of us are just wired to be too thoughtfull. Light & Love
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Date: 7/19/2009 3:01:00 PM
Short, with many thoughts for the reader Steve>>James
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