Depression Is

Depression is that
wicked beast who
sucks your soul from
your body.

It feeds on your
brain until it seems
not a single cell
remains.

Worst of all it hardens
your heart so that no
love may enter
or exit.


Total words=40
written 12/05/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Neumann Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 2:23 AM
I like this. Congratulations on your win, Kai
Murray Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 5:14 AM
Thank you for the placement Kai.
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 8:59 PM
that is very deep depression. Great job, Jean. Congrats.
Murray Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 1:35 AM
God willing, mine was a kind of post traumatic stress disorder and not endogenous Andrea.
Martin Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 12:27 PM
Great description! Congrats! :-)
Murray Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 1:11 PM
Thank you Mark. It is something I would not wish on my worst enemy.
Roper Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 9:16 AM
Jean, if describe depression to a tee congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Murray Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 11:13 AM
The strange this is Eve, to the outside world you look just fine. Thank you for your hugs. I hug you back.
Krampe Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 7:16 AM
Congrats on your win, Jean. Yes, that is what it feels like.
Murray Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 11:11 AM
Like The Dead Poet's Society Agnes, we are The Depressed Poet's Society.
Y. Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 3:15 AM
WoW! Jean, this a good description of depression. Congratulations on your win.It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Murray Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 6:54 AM
Thank you Alexis.
White Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 12:28 AM
That last line, it is so sad but accurate. Congratulations!
Murray Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 1:21 AM
Thank you Darren.
James Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 11:28 PM
Too true!
Murray Avatar
December 6, 2016 at 2:29 AM
You too??
Turner Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 10:37 AM
You are so right, Jean. This should do well:)
Murray Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 3:07 PM
As long as you and I well Daniel. Contests pale in comparison.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 9:18 AM
So aptly described. Such a horrible beast!
Murray Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 3:05 PM
And invisible too ! It just sneaks up on you.
Gupta Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 8:41 AM
Poetically coloured clinical description ... Very well expressed ...
Murray Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 3:04 PM
Thank you Probir.
Vinson Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 4:23 AM
Great poem, Jean. A big rolling circle of reality.
Murray Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 2:59 PM
Now you are going all sappy and sentimental on me Doug!
Vinson Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 4:45 AM
Jean, I think you hit it on the head when talking about no love being able to enter or exit. With poetry - and indeed, with the internet, being online, etc. - I can see the "exit" part being aided, and the PoetrySoup crew seem to be admirably receptive and *gulp* quite loving in return.
Murray Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 4:32 AM
So many poets it seems have suffered Doug. Above average. Poetry certainly played a big part in my rescue.
Allison Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 4:17 AM
aww Jean this is so dark and sad... I am finding the contest poems hard to read as I don't suffer but I know people who do:-( hugs jan xx
Vinson Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 4:30 AM
Tell you what - this contest is bringing out some *great* poems. This may be an extreme example, but I've long thought that sadness is easier to write about than happiness; the joyful ones easily get maudlin, sappy, or sentimental.
Murray Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 4:28 AM
Sad but true I'm afraid Jan. The good news is, I have lost half a stone without even trying, since I stopped my medication. Last spring!
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