Paula Grover Poet Free verse

Depression Is

Depression Is

Depression is...
a dog-paddle in The Tar Pit of Agony
a slow drop into Quicksand
a dark marsh at night
a fallen, hollow tree
a desert of endless sand
an ocean of impenetrable deep
a long, troubled sleep
a nightmare that lasts into day
a patient gasping for air on a metal table
a preacher preaching an impossible fable
ghosts in an empty house 
a frozen lake 
exhaustion on top of a snowy mountain peak
the sudden gutless drop of a roller coaster ride
the drab convention of yet another day
a pen running out of ink 
a song with no singer 
a bird with no wings
a mouldy bun
a shorted electrical circuit
a landscape with no observer
an empty coffin
a smoke-filled coffee shop
a hyena on heroin
an ending with no story
a beginning with no end...

The End.

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Klio Tsitsikroni September 5, 2017 at 1:01 PM This is indeed awesome. And a never ending list of metaphors to describe the demon so well. Excellent. Paula Grover September 5, 2017 at 3:21 PM Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts on my poem, Klio. You used another metaphor which describes depression well, "demon". That was one I hadn't thought of!

Laura Hay August 8, 2016 at 3:33 PM Superb write and i empathise with the variety of what 'depression is' for you and many. a 7 for the poem, warm regards Paula Grover August 11, 2016 at 6:34 PM Hi, Laura, Thanks so much for your feedback on my poem. It was a barrage of metaphors that surfaced out of a deep sadness and I finally decided to share it here. Poetry can be very powerful in expressing the inner experience--thank you for reading and commenting on it.