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Depression

A pall of darkness overshadows my existence I am a mummy wrapped in worthless thoughts sinking in the devil's quicksand of hell. Written on 12/4/2016

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 2/24/2017 3:39:00 PM

Powerful poetry, Laura. It's as real as real can get. I love it, although the gothic ambience others may fear. I dig your style of poetry very much. A soul-piercing poem. Love and smiles to you.

Laura Leiser
Date: 2/24/2017 6:06:00 PM

Thanks, Freddie!

Eve Roper

Date: 12/5/2016 12:44:00 PM

I don't want to be in this person's shoes,,, :( Very good write, Laura, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Laura Leiser
Date: 12/5/2016 2:53:00 PM

It is a dark write, as intended...thanks for commenting, Eve!

Chris Green

Date: 12/5/2016 8:01:00 AM

Such a deeply empty feeling and dark poem. You have touched this subject wonderfully. Good luck in the contest

Laura Leiser
Date: 12/5/2016 12:21:00 PM

Thank you, Chris :)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/5/2016 1:47:00 AM

very dark and deep Laura:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 12/5/2016 12:21:00 PM

Thanks, Jan :)