Depression

Falling farther from faith, failing
Diving, down deep
Faithfully fighting, finally
Listening, living, lying
Some souls sleep somberly,... sinking

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Poet Destroyer A

August 27, 2015 at 1:14 PM

anytime.. :)

Poet Destroyer A

August 27, 2015 at 1:03 PM

Hi Jacob, Alliteration's on of my favorite forms. I try adding a little alliteration throughout my writes. At times, it gives it a better flow. Just like this poem here... Depression kills the soul. No matter how many breaths we take, depression is a sentence we give ourselves once we fall deep into it. Enjoyed... LINDA

Jacob Frey

August 27, 2015 at 1:06 PM

True words Linda kill the soul, it does. Once again, I appreciate the comment and the kind words.

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