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Depression

Beware! In my Dwelling, a predator slinks in without Even saying hello - spirit who Pretends he’s my creditor - green with greed and Remarkably yellow. My words have Escaped this parasite-pest, “You are So unwelcome here, a no-guest, a remnant Scrap from a life I once led." You would bleed me white or kill me Instead. I ban you contender Of aggression, Begone Now! rid me of this depression.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/27/2025 12:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your powerful "Depression" write. Great Ending. Yes, "Begone Now! rid me of this depression." Have a blessed day with your win.......

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 7/1/2025 6:21:00 AM

thanks, Paula. Am watching my grandson today - he is trying to learn some independence at eleven; but he gets bored and maybe a little scared at being alone all day. Last week, he sent me a message on the phone - "Nana, can you come watch me" And of course, I could. His older bro is asleep in the basement most days; but he wants some conversation and "lunch." Thanks for listening. Last night he said, "Come over about ten tomorrow."