Michael Tor Poet Rhyme

Depraved Richard Kucklinski Four Lines Contest

Sordid lunatic relentless beatings, given by his parents, were daily worn!
            Suppressing anguish and heartfelt wounds, takes on an evil form!
                His heart is scarred, there is terror inside, he must unleash!
          It's bottled up, he kills and kills, as childhood rage, is then released!
            
             
          







Michael Tor 9/19/2015  Broken Wings. Contest. Four Lines

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Andrea Dietrich October 4, 2017 at 2:58 PM WELL DONE summing up the life of this maniac. Another belated congrats to you. Michael Tor October 4, 2017 at 9:19 PM Thank you Andrea. I appreciate your kind words.

Joan Donnelly Ellis October 9, 2015 at 1:41 AM Congratulations on your win Michael This write deserved it Michael Tor October 9, 2015 at 3:32 AM Thanks Joan.

Skat A September 28, 2015 at 9:56 PM Michael, Congratulations on your Four Line win. Forever **SKAT** Michael Tor September 28, 2015 at 11:22 PM Thank you so much Skat...

Tammy Reams September 27, 2015 at 9:28 AM Very dark Michael! Loved it. Congrats on your win! Michael Tor September 28, 2015 at 11:22 PM Thank you Tammy. I appreciate your thoughts.

Jan Allison September 26, 2015 at 5:40 PM deep and dark many congrats Michael:-) hugs jan xx Michael Tor September 28, 2015 at 11:21 PM Thank you Jan hugs back.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 24, 2015 at 11:40 PM Wonderful expressions Michael! Congrats on big win! Michael Tor September 28, 2015 at 11:21 PM Thank you Dr. Sharma. Your thoughts are well appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2015 at 3:29 PM well done, Michael. Congratulations in the contest. Michael Tor September 28, 2015 at 11:20 PM Andrea coming from you it means a lot. Thank you so much.

Casarah Nance September 24, 2015 at 7:45 AM well that is a bit disturbing, and nicely so, grats on your win Michael Tor September 28, 2015 at 11:19 PM Yes it was, your Emotions one was too. I loved it. It was an incredible write!

Barbara Gorelick September 23, 2015 at 11:18 PM You did good! congrats on your win with this insightful, if scary write. BG Michael Tor September 28, 2015 at 11:18 PM Thanks Barbara appreciate your thoughts on this one.

Alexis Y. September 23, 2015 at 9:24 PM Michael, I had a feeling this dark would make it to the winner's circle. Great job! Congratulations on your win:-)Alexis Michael Tor September 28, 2015 at 11:17 PM Thank you Alexis.

Eve Roper September 23, 2015 at 6:09 PM Congratulations on your win,Michael. Hugs Eve Michael Tor September 23, 2015 at 6:30 PM Thank you Eve

James Inman September 23, 2015 at 11:05 AM Well done Michael. Sad result of a sad life. Michael Tor September 23, 2015 at 6:29 PM Thank you James.

CayCay Godwin September 21, 2015 at 11:00 AM Great job summing up the basic, monster-creating, ingredients. I like the rhyme used for one so abused. Good luck ... CayCay Michael Tor September 21, 2015 at 3:14 PM Thanks CayCay.

Tammy Reams September 19, 2015 at 1:29 PM Wonderful write Michael. Sad what some children become when a man in a life of turmoil. Good luck in the contest. Michael Tor September 19, 2015 at 2:57 PM It is Tammy. Over and over you see this with murderers. They are abused when they are children. Thank you for your comments, and the encouragement.