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Depraved Richard Kucklinski Four Lines Contest

Sordid lunatic relentless beatings, given by his parents, were daily worn! Suppressing anguish and heartfelt wounds, takes on an evil form! His heart is scarred, there is terror inside, he must unleash! It's bottled up, he kills and kills, as childhood rage, is then released! Michael Tor 9/19/2015 Broken Wings. Contest. Four Lines

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2017 2:58:00 PM

WELL DONE summing up the life of this maniac. Another belated congrats to you.

Michael Tor
Date: 10/4/2017 9:19:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. I appreciate your kind words.

Joan Donnelly Ellis

Date: 10/9/2015 1:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Michael This write deserved it

Michael Tor
Date: 10/9/2015 3:32:00 AM

Thanks Joan.

Skat A

Date: 9/28/2015 9:56:00 PM

Michael, Congratulations on your Four Line win. Forever **SKAT**

Michael Tor
Date: 9/28/2015 11:22:00 PM

Thank you so much Skat...

Tammy Reams

Date: 9/27/2015 9:28:00 AM

Very dark Michael! Loved it. Congrats on your win!

Michael Tor
Date: 9/28/2015 11:22:00 PM

Thank you Tammy. I appreciate your thoughts.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2015 5:40:00 PM

deep and dark many congrats Michael:-) hugs jan xx

Michael Tor
Date: 9/28/2015 11:21:00 PM

Thank you Jan hugs back.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/24/2015 11:40:00 PM

Wonderful expressions Michael! Congrats on big win!

Michael Tor
Date: 9/28/2015 11:21:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Sharma. Your thoughts are well appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2015 3:29:00 PM

well done, Michael. Congratulations in the contest.

Michael Tor
Date: 9/28/2015 11:20:00 PM

Andrea coming from you it means a lot. Thank you so much.

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/24/2015 7:45:00 AM

well that is a bit disturbing, and nicely so, grats on your win

Michael Tor
Date: 9/28/2015 11:19:00 PM

Yes it was, your Emotions one was too. I loved it. It was an incredible write!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/23/2015 11:18:00 PM

You did good! congrats on your win with this insightful, if scary write. BG

Michael Tor
Date: 9/28/2015 11:18:00 PM

Thanks Barbara appreciate your thoughts on this one.

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/23/2015 9:24:00 PM

Michael, I had a feeling this dark would make it to the winner's circle. Great job! Congratulations on your win:-)Alexis

Michael Tor
Date: 9/28/2015 11:17:00 PM

Thank you Alexis.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/23/2015 6:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win,Michael. Hugs Eve

Michael Tor
Date: 9/23/2015 6:30:00 PM

Thank you Eve

James Inman

Date: 9/23/2015 11:05:00 AM

Well done Michael. Sad result of a sad life.

Michael Tor
Date: 9/23/2015 6:29:00 PM

Thank you James.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/21/2015 11:00:00 AM

Great job summing up the basic, monster-creating, ingredients. I like the rhyme used for one so abused. Good luck ... CayCay

Michael Tor
Date: 9/21/2015 3:14:00 PM

Thanks CayCay.

Tammy Reams

Date: 9/19/2015 1:29:00 PM

Wonderful write Michael. Sad what some children become when a man in a life of turmoil. Good luck in the contest.

Michael Tor
Date: 9/19/2015 2:57:00 PM

It is Tammy. Over and over you see this with murderers. They are abused when they are children. Thank you for your comments, and the encouragement.