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Depraved Richard Kucklinski Four Lines Contest

Sordid lunatic relentless beatings, given by his parents, were daily worn!
            Suppressing anguish and heartfelt wounds, takes on an evil form!
                His heart is scarred, there is terror inside, he must unleash!
          It's bottled up, he kills and kills, as childhood rage, is then released!
            
             
          







Michael Tor 9/19/2015  Broken Wings. Contest. Four Lines

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/4/2017 2:58:00 PM WELL DONE summing up the life of this maniac. Another belated congrats to you. Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 10/4/2017 9:19:00 PM Thank you Andrea. I appreciate your kind words.

Joan Donnelly Ellis Date: 10/9/2015 1:41:00 AM Congratulations on your win Michael This write deserved it Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 10/9/2015 3:32:00 AM Thanks Joan.

Skat A Date: 9/28/2015 9:56:00 PM Michael, Congratulations on your Four Line win. Forever **SKAT** Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 9/28/2015 11:22:00 PM Thank you so much Skat...

Tammy Reams Date: 9/27/2015 9:28:00 AM Very dark Michael! Loved it. Congrats on your win! Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 9/28/2015 11:22:00 PM Thank you Tammy. I appreciate your thoughts.

Jan Allison Date: 9/26/2015 5:40:00 PM deep and dark many congrats Michael:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 9/28/2015 11:21:00 PM Thank you Jan hugs back.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 9/24/2015 11:40:00 PM Wonderful expressions Michael! Congrats on big win! Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 9/28/2015 11:21:00 PM Thank you Dr. Sharma. Your thoughts are well appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/24/2015 3:29:00 PM well done, Michael. Congratulations in the contest. Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 9/28/2015 11:20:00 PM Andrea coming from you it means a lot. Thank you so much.

Casarah Nance Date: 9/24/2015 7:45:00 AM well that is a bit disturbing, and nicely so, grats on your win Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 9/28/2015 11:19:00 PM Yes it was, your Emotions one was too. I loved it. It was an incredible write!

Barbara Gorelick Date: 9/23/2015 11:18:00 PM You did good! congrats on your win with this insightful, if scary write. BG Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 9/28/2015 11:18:00 PM Thanks Barbara appreciate your thoughts on this one.

Alexis Y. Date: 9/23/2015 9:24:00 PM Michael, I had a feeling this dark would make it to the winner's circle. Great job! Congratulations on your win:-)Alexis Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 9/28/2015 11:17:00 PM Thank you Alexis.

Eve Roper Date: 9/23/2015 6:09:00 PM Congratulations on your win,Michael. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 9/23/2015 6:30:00 PM Thank you Eve

James Inman Date: 9/23/2015 11:05:00 AM Well done Michael. Sad result of a sad life. Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 9/23/2015 6:29:00 PM Thank you James.

CayCay Jennings Date: 9/21/2015 11:00:00 AM Great job summing up the basic, monster-creating, ingredients. I like the rhyme used for one so abused. Good luck ... CayCay Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 9/21/2015 3:14:00 PM Thanks CayCay.

Tammy Reams Date: 9/19/2015 1:29:00 PM Wonderful write Michael. Sad what some children become when a man in a life of turmoil. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 9/19/2015 2:57:00 PM It is Tammy. Over and over you see this with murderers. They are abused when they are children. Thank you for your comments, and the encouragement.