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Deppression

"Initial connection before my deep depression The time we shared affections then the sad objection Never questioned the first impression I got when you told me you liked me I had to ask because the feelings I had for you were authentic Everything I said I meant it I envisioned our life with happiness All I could see was the true identity that was alive in me I'm sorry I had to leave but wished I could of told you how I felt I need help I'm dying inside because I kept my feelings inside of me Feeding the depression that has affected me"

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Date: 10/12/2017 1:19:00 AM
I can relate to this very well, and you have written a very good poem, it reads by the way like a performance poem, with its internal rhyme and its rhythm.
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