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Dependency

Before – when you were here, I complained. Thoughtlessly. I had no complaints – I was miserable. Brushing the depths to see your reflection, I have no interest. My reflection is on the surface, I see no smile – A drug? To make you see yourself – They call it what? Say it – Before – when you were here, Love fell around in mud caused by tears, Not mine, though, yours, my creation I suppose. Your drug tells you of life – and you grow? Now you’re strong? Now you see yourself in the reflection, Unfortunately I’m gone. I have no interest – I’m the damned one. I saw another point of view. Before – when you were here, I complained. Thoughtlessly.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/26/2010 9:48:00 PM
Thanks, everyone, for the positive comments and encouragement. I really appreciate them.
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Date: 3/25/2010 4:20:00 PM
CJ, Congratulations on your worthy poem feature this week. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/23/2010 3:41:00 AM
Congratulations CJ, on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/22/2010 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week CJ. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2010 5:16:00 AM
Congrats on the featured poem---well done!! compaining comes too easy.
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Date: 3/21/2010 12:03:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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