Dependence Door

I despise this horrible mind attack
The mistakes I've made have caused horrid facts
I have wrecked everything; left bad impacts
Is it that bad, to wish the normal back?

The circumstances, of a week before?
Before you grew impatient; slammed the door?
Beautiful disaster; has no galore
I'm crying, bleeding, on the dirty floor

I cannot blame anyone but myself
This ill fate has gave me terrible luck
My arm, says, "This big loss puts me through hell."
When I beg your mercy, you scream, "Shut up!"

I'm hysterical, weeping, on the porch
Will you please, please, please just open the door?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 2, 2011 at 3:57 PM
Nice attempt at writing sonnet with expressions, Maddie
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