Deb M Poet Rhyme

-Departure

When I depart this world 

I will take with me

A heart abundant and bestowed with love and kindness 

A fulfilled life lived happily


I know my words sound somewhat fluffy and light

Perhaps inauthentic, stock standard, corny or cliche

Yet these words l have written  ‘ are solely my truth’

My lifes true meaning at the end of my days

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Kim Rodrigues January 18, 2025 at 7:12 AM Nonsense, sometimes the simplicity of thought is prolific! Hugs Deb M February 12, 2025 at 12:41 AM The power of simplicity is wonderful! Debx

Linda Alice Fowler January 13, 2025 at 1:38 PM Feel-good poem dear Deb. Happy i the way to go! :) Deb M January 14, 2025 at 2:09 PM Hi LO….How lovely to see you again….hope all is well with you! Yes, happy is the way to go! Debx

Jay Narain January 13, 2025 at 10:43 AM NICE CONTENT FEELING POEM. This is the thing we carry with us all the time. Deb M January 13, 2025 at 11:45 AM Yes it is Jay…..thankyou so much for dropping by…..much appreciated! Debx

Arthur Vaso January 12, 2025 at 10:04 PM Well I have no claim to happiness, so I guess for me is 2 Pizzas and a favorite comic book and a bottle of wine! Deb M January 13, 2025 at 2:39 AM No claim to happiness that can’t be true Arthur? I hope not my friend! Debx

Gershon Wolf January 12, 2025 at 7:54 PM What a bracing thought, Deb. May it be so! :) Gershon Deb M January 13, 2025 at 2:40 AM One day BB! Debx