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Departing Words

The blast of his words unexpected.
The spoil underneath t’was suspected.
“I can’t ring the bell.
I’m buried in hell.”
The bones of the tape were projected.

10/17/2019

A NEW Halloween Inspired Limerick Poetry Contest
9/9/5/5/9 and aabba
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Elaine Perrin Date: 11/14/2019 4:48:00 AM Love it! Congratulations x Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/31/2019 11:01:00 AM Now that's a frightening image! Congratulations on your win, Kim. Have a Happy Halloween, Carolyn Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/31/2019 11:04:00 AM Thank you, Carolyn!

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 10/30/2019 8:39:00 PM oooh scary stuff Kim, congrats on your win , Excellent in creativity Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/31/2019 11:04:00 AM Thank you, Pixie!

Jan Allison Date: 10/30/2019 7:57:00 PM clever limerick Kim, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/30/2019 8:12:00 PM Thanks, Jan! xx

Tania Kitchin Date: 10/30/2019 7:14:00 PM Kim, congratulations on your winning placement with your spooky and clever limerick! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/30/2019 7:19:00 PM Thanks so much, Tania! Fun contest!

Gershon Wolf Date: 10/19/2019 9:50:00 PM I'm thinking that 'projected' can work a few different ways here. Nicely penned limerick, Kim. ~ Boo (Radley) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/23/2019 8:42:00 PM Wow! nice catch...like I've said before I love when other readers see more. LOL on the Boo Radley!

Lindsay Laurie Date: 10/18/2019 5:53:00 PM G'day Kim … not up to speed with Halloween but gee your limerick is so well written - thanks Kim - Lindsay Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/18/2019 10:17:00 PM Thank you, Lindsay! :)

Pat Adams Date: 10/18/2019 3:17:00 PM Great rhyme and flow. Creepy and so apt, definitely should place, I would say!.....Pat Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/18/2019 3:55:00 PM We will see! Thanks, Pat!

Juliet Ligon Date: 10/18/2019 2:39:00 PM What a great Halloween limerick! This is eerie. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/18/2019 3:55:00 PM Thank you, Juliet!

Chris Green Date: 10/18/2019 8:05:00 AM This was great Kim. Is there no end to your talent? Happy Halloween. : ) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/18/2019 8:24:00 AM Pish-posh...lol! Thanks, sweet friend!

John Gondolf Date: 10/18/2019 7:25:00 AM Halloween is upon us. Best of luck in the contest, Kim. Hugs, John Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/18/2019 8:24:00 AM Thanks, John!

Vladislav Raven Date: 10/18/2019 3:07:00 AM Love the Limerick Kim. Halloween is on the way. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/18/2019 7:11:00 AM Be blessed, Mike! :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/17/2019 11:16:00 PM Now I’m ready for Halloween. ;0) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/18/2019 7:09:00 AM LOL!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/17/2019 9:07:00 PM Great flow in your Halloween limerick, Kim. Rhyme and meter spot on. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/17/2019 9:09:00 PM Thank you, Andrea!