Kim Rodrigues Poet Limerick

Departing Words

The blast of his words unexpected.
The spoil underneath t’was suspected.
“I can’t ring the bell.
I’m buried in hell.”
The bones of the tape were projected.

10/17/2019

A NEW Halloween Inspired Limerick Poetry Contest
9/9/5/5/9 and aabba
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Elaine Perrin November 14, 2019 at 4:48 AM Love it! Congratulations x

Carolyn Devonshire October 31, 2019 at 11:01 AM Now that's a frightening image! Congratulations on your win, Kim. Have a Happy Halloween, Carolyn Kim Rodrigues October 31, 2019 at 11:04 AM Thank you, Carolyn!

Mystic Rose Rose October 30, 2019 at 8:39 PM oooh scary stuff Kim, congrats on your win , Excellent in creativity Kim Rodrigues October 31, 2019 at 11:04 AM Thank you, Pixie!

Jan Allison October 30, 2019 at 7:57 PM clever limerick Kim, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Kim Rodrigues October 30, 2019 at 8:12 PM Thanks, Jan! xx

Tania Kitchin October 30, 2019 at 7:14 PM Kim, congratulations on your winning placement with your spooky and clever limerick! Kim Rodrigues October 30, 2019 at 7:19 PM Thanks so much, Tania! Fun contest!

Gershon Wolf October 19, 2019 at 9:50 PM I'm thinking that 'projected' can work a few different ways here. Nicely penned limerick, Kim. ~ Boo (Radley) Kim Rodrigues October 23, 2019 at 8:42 PM Wow! nice catch...like I've said before I love when other readers see more. LOL on the Boo Radley!

Lindsay Laurie October 18, 2019 at 5:53 PM G'day Kim … not up to speed with Halloween but gee your limerick is so well written - thanks Kim - Lindsay Kim Rodrigues October 18, 2019 at 10:17 PM Thank you, Lindsay! :)

Pat Adams October 18, 2019 at 3:17 PM Great rhyme and flow. Creepy and so apt, definitely should place, I would say!.....Pat Kim Rodrigues October 18, 2019 at 3:55 PM We will see! Thanks, Pat!

Juliet Ligon October 18, 2019 at 2:39 PM What a great Halloween limerick! This is eerie. Kim Rodrigues October 18, 2019 at 3:55 PM Thank you, Juliet!

Chris Green October 18, 2019 at 8:05 AM This was great Kim. Is there no end to your talent? Happy Halloween. : ) Kim Rodrigues October 18, 2019 at 8:24 AM Pish-posh...lol! Thanks, sweet friend!

John Gondolf October 18, 2019 at 7:25 AM Halloween is upon us. Best of luck in the contest, Kim. Hugs, John Kim Rodrigues October 18, 2019 at 8:24 AM Thanks, John!

Vladislav Raven October 18, 2019 at 3:07 AM Love the Limerick Kim. Halloween is on the way. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX Kim Rodrigues October 18, 2019 at 7:11 AM Be blessed, Mike! :)

Richard Lamoureux October 17, 2019 at 11:16 PM Now I’m ready for Halloween. ;0) Kim Rodrigues October 18, 2019 at 7:09 AM LOL!

Andrea Dietrich October 17, 2019 at 9:07 PM Great flow in your Halloween limerick, Kim. Rhyme and meter spot on. Kim Rodrigues October 17, 2019 at 9:09 PM Thank you, Andrea!