Brandy Nicole Poet Rhyme

Depart

Words in Art- began touching faithfully 
             until, a misguided HEART wished for them to

                           - Depart


              The sad truth remains true
                      one plus one makes:
                  me still here, 
                                 minus you 

                       
                   (CrAzY math these days)
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~ Lingering Thoughts ~

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Joseph May June 8, 2023 at 7:37 AM The emotinal equations of the heart can be tricky, Wonderful write Brandy, Hugs Brandy Nicole June 8, 2023 at 8:17 PM So true ! Thank you Joseph. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy

John Watt October 7, 2020 at 9:30 PM Deep thoughts with an underlying sadness throughout. The departing of a friend is always hard... sigh. Brandy Nicole October 8, 2020 at 10:09 AM There is a sadness within. He is missed by me and so many. I hope he returns soon. Thank you John, for your kindness and your for your support. Hugs, Brandy

Sunlite Wanter December 2, 2018 at 10:38 AM For some reason I have been missing your posts. My loss! Brandy Nicole December 2, 2018 at 7:28 PM Thank you Sunlite Wanter. Your kind words are appreciated. I understand if you have been unable to comment. No worries. Comment whenever you can. Many wonderful blessings to you. ~ Brandy

Paul Marc November 4, 2018 at 7:05 AM Deep Art - heart felt and true. Brandy Nicole November 4, 2018 at 6:10 PM So true. Thank you P.M. Richter. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Richard Lamoureux October 29, 2018 at 7:49 PM Brief, sad and still beautiful. The mark of a great communicator. Thanks for your visit, Brandy Nicole October 29, 2018 at 9:38 PM Thank you Richard. Sadness does caress my thoughts. I know there is a reason for everything. Sometimes, a heart finds comfort in knowing that fact. I appreciate you. ~ Brandy

Pashang Salehi October 29, 2018 at 3:45 PM Nice... I am without me. Brandy Nicole October 29, 2018 at 7:17 PM :) Soft giggle. Perhaps I am too. Thank you for your kind words. ~ Brandy

Charlie Way October 28, 2018 at 7:42 AM Smart poem, Brandy. Brandy Nicole October 28, 2018 at 3:23 PM Thank you Charlie. Your kindness is appreciated. ~ Brandy

Vladislav Raven October 27, 2018 at 3:17 AM Hi Brandy, wonderful thoughts to read this morning. Sometimes it is better when the one departs, leaving a stronger one in place. Most interesting thoughts to peruse this morning. In the end the math does work, a beautiful soul remains. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX Brandy Nicole October 27, 2018 at 7:15 PM Dear Vladislav, sometimes it does make things better- when one departs. However, other times- it leaves moments empty. Thank you for your kind words. Your thoughts are appreciated. Happy Saturday to you as well. ~ Brandy

Arturo Michael October 20, 2018 at 9:44 AM Who would be crazy enough to depart from you...that one plus one should be eleven little ones...All the best Brandy Brandy Nicole October 20, 2018 at 12:55 PM You are so kind. Such a wonderful thing to say to me. I appreciate you and your thoughts Arturo. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Sylvia Coulstock October 19, 2018 at 5:58 PM You have such a magic touch with words Brandy.Once again you reach me by using so little yet you express so much. Brandy Nicole October 19, 2018 at 9:03 PM Thank you June. You and your thoughts are always appreciated. My best to you. ~ Brandy

CayCay Godwin October 18, 2018 at 3:41 PM Sweet and touching mixed together by cleverness! Poetry hugs ... CayCay Brandy Nicole October 18, 2018 at 4:15 PM Thank you CayCay. Your thoughts certainly are appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy

Silent One October 17, 2018 at 3:25 PM Great last stanza.... always sad when one has departed prematurely.. Brandy Nicole October 17, 2018 at 9:18 PM Thank you Silent One. It's true, sadness lingers when one leaves. I appreciate your thoughts and your kindness. ~ Brandy

Chuck Melugin October 17, 2018 at 3:22 PM Brandy...You've been climbing a creative tree! Apples of awesome!! Brandy Nicole October 17, 2018 at 9:16 PM Thank you Chuck! Such an amazing thing to say to me. You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Becca Teagan October 16, 2018 at 10:53 PM wow. I'm in awe of your creative thought process. I am feeling this. Brandy Nicole October 16, 2018 at 11:12 PM Thank you Becca. I was thinking you might feel this, as these emotions are real and subtraction has occurred. Sometimes that's a good thing, but not in this case. ~ Brandy

Nette Onclaud October 16, 2018 at 2:52 PM two minus one is all of you... such an empowering poem if you are into self-care, never mind the science of math...well done, brandy!..huggs Brandy Nicole October 16, 2018 at 7:01 PM True. And if one minus one is nothing, plus one again- equals one. Sigh. It still leaves one out. Thank you nette for your kind words. I appreciate you. Hugs, Brandy

Winged Warrior October 16, 2018 at 9:56 AM 'In an isosceles triangle that has exactly two equal sides, the equal sides are called legs and the third side is called the base.'...your poetry is like that triangle...where the base is your imagination and the two equal sides are...well, I'll leave that up to you...great poetic equation Brandy...love & math...^WW^ Brandy Nicole October 16, 2018 at 11:03 AM Is that so?? My poetry is like a Triangle?? :) I will let my imagination linger in this thought for a while. Hopefully my thoughts won't get tangled up. Ohhh, they did once- in the October Moon poem. :) You always know how to make me smile. Thank you My Warrior with Wings. Love and Addition. Not subtraction. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit October 16, 2018 at 6:14 AM The misguided ones need to depart anyway..the math does work. Cleverly said, Brandy. Brandy Nicole October 16, 2018 at 10:53 AM Perhaps. Or, the misguided ones need to study the equation a little more- see where they may have made a mistake. (Just my simple thinking though). Thank you Vijay. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf October 16, 2018 at 5:12 AM It is always sad to see the good ones go especially when others made them feel unwelcome. Nicely penned, Brandy. All the best my friend. John Brandy Nicole October 16, 2018 at 10:49 AM Yes, I agree John. Subtracting words makes a difference, when you are leaving someone out. You and your thoughts are always appreciated. ~ Brandy

Mockingbird Stevenson October 16, 2018 at 3:05 AM Snap! Love a good math poem! ?? Brandy Nicole October 16, 2018 at 10:45 AM :) Thank you. You liking this and then not, made the smile. Math is confusing these days. ~ Brandy Mockingbird Stevenson October 16, 2018 at 3:06 AM Meant xx Not ?? Mockingbird Stevenson October 16, 2018 at 3:05 AM

Lyric Man October 15, 2018 at 9:33 PM Your clever melancholy math is perfection! Brandy Nicole October 15, 2018 at 10:53 PM Some adding and subtracting has been done, yet- it seems the subtraction has won. In this case. ~ Brandy