Denver Nights Ii

I've been traveling 
on the go
to where
no one knows
all the while
i'm alone
when did goodbye
become a song

here's something for you
and here's something 
for you as well

all these passings
i do not know
i've been traveling 
on the go
all the while 
you're alone
goodbye
became a song
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 2:13 PM
Don't think that I want the Goodbye song..Great idea and presentation..Sara
Golden Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 2:05 PM
as much as i appreciate your negativity, i can do with out it, find something constructive to do with your time and keep it to yourself... we like to think we can do and say what ever we want and nothing will happen... that will soon change
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