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Dentist Visit

He comes with a soothing smile, and makes ours a toothless one. He is the nightmare of every child in town. He pulls, tugs, twists and finally snatch our tooth from us. He makes us go through hell, and then collects his bill. At the door he says "Please do visit again" . flashing his soothing smile again.

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Date: 11/17/2013 10:05:00 PM
Congratulations on the fine win, Pratap
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Date: 11/17/2013 3:58:00 PM
Vinayak, . Congratulation, Thank you for the fine win..... Sending hugs: -) Thank you for the support. always~ LINDA
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Date: 10/10/2013 10:27:00 PM
This is a creative and interesting write Dentists can be scary, especially to children. Nice job
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 10/10/2013 11:05:00 PM
this piece was recollected from my experience
Date: 8/29/2013 6:27:00 PM
I think I'd change dentists. I went to a dentist when I was a child who was very mean. It was a nightmare going to him so I can relate to this. Nice write. Love, Kim
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 9/24/2013 9:31:00 PM
thnx 4 sharing ur thots
Date: 8/26/2013 11:30:00 PM
Never thought it was that bad going to a dentist.. :) A~D
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