Dentist Visit

He comes with a soothing smile,
and makes ours a toothless one.
He is the nightmare of
every child in town.
He pulls, tugs, twists and
finally snatch our tooth from us.
He makes us go through hell,
and then collects his bill.
At the door he says "Please do visit again" .
flashing his soothing smile again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mehta Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 10:05 PM
Congratulations on the fine win, Pratap
A   Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 3:58 PM
Vinayak, . Congratulation, Thank you for the fine win..... Sending hugs: -) Thank you for the support. always~ LINDA
Davis Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 10:27 PM
This is a creative and interesting write Dentists can be scary, especially to children. Nice job
Pratap Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 11:05 PM
this piece was recollected from my experience
Merryman Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 6:27 PM
I think I'd change dentists. I went to a dentist when I was a child who was very mean. It was a nightmare going to him so I can relate to this. Nice write. Love, Kim
Pratap Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 9:31 PM
thnx 4 sharing ur thots
Danie Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 11:30 PM
Never thought it was that bad going to a dentist.. :) A~D
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