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Dented Cans

"dented cans" bad plans "dented cans" beware spams "dented cans" could be sans "dented cans" metaphoric sham's ~~~~~~~~~~~~ DENTED CANS - Poetry Contest, sponsored by John Lawless 12-24-17

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 12/24/2017 11:38:00 PM

Oh nice one! That last line hit it out of the park. My best to you! xomo

Mick Talbot
Date: 1/2/2018 7:13:00 PM

Hi Maureen, happy to be back, many thanks for your kind words! Happy new year, Mick... PS: Not going to dwell on it as all is well for the present, I will just mention that we thought we were going to lose my wife's 92-year-old mum 2 days before Xmas but she pulled through. It has been out of respect for her, and her family that I have not put pen to paper.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/24/2017 4:48:00 PM

Thought provoking rhyme and so many scams are around especially at this time of year:-(and if I get another call from 'Microsoft' I will scream or read them one of my poop poems not sure which yet lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Mick Talbot
Date: 1/2/2018 7:28:00 PM

Many thanks Jan, appreciated! PS: Not going to dwell on it as all is well for the present, I will just mention that we thought we were going to lose my wife's 92-year-old mum 2 days before Xmas but she pulled through. It has been out of respect for her, and her family that I have not put pen to paper.