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Dented Can

DENTED CAN kicking it down an old dusty road mind chasing dogs a type of relay race legs release, next guy kicks the bone no wonder of what sup was spooned nor if a homeless man kicked the can did the dent do him in were the vittles spoilt man’s worst abuse human, beast or aluminum can a drunk picks it up toothless, smiles crushing it against his skull the derelicts say “aw, you ruined it” 1/3/2018

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Date: 1/4/2018 5:54:00 AM
It could be also seen as the can is depicting life in which case we have a lot to think about! Well done my friend, Kim! Good luck!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2018 6:07:00 AM
Thank you, Demetrios! I enjoyed your analysis! I like when fellow poets look deeper than the surface of the poem and sometimes find more than even the poet. Blessings <3 Kim
Date: 1/4/2018 12:58:00 AM
Great imagery Kim... Loved it... Good luck in the contest...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2018 5:45:00 AM
Thank you, Supraja! :)
Date: 1/3/2018 10:49:00 PM
Potent penning! Images bouncing like that can, so well done Kim! My best to you :) xomo!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2018 5:45:00 AM
Thank you, Maureen! xx

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