Denied Halloween Candy

Parents now trusted me enough to take my lil' sis out on Halloween! Sis, a jellybean, me, a green bean, walked to get my boyfriend, just sixteen. His pet monkey jumped out mean, bit sis, who got no candy, but a vaccine.
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Allison Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 5:59 AM
Sure is a horror story caycay, many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 10:12 PM
Back with congrats! :) xomo
La France Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 12:42 PM
CayCay, congratulations on your win in my contest ~
Roper Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 8:40 PM
A big congratulations on your win, CayCay, ouch : >(
Dietrich Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 2:25 PM
oh that was such a cute clever ending!Congrats on your win. Soupmail, for quick question
Andresen Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 2:01 AM
- Fun to read, CayCay :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 1:26 AM
Ouch! A poi-sen could get hoyt, as they say in Brooklyn, New Yoyk! Congrats on your placement in the contest, CayCay! :) gw
Kiser Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 3:43 PM
Ooh, that smarts; that was cute for halloween. I once knew someone who had a chimpanzee; it had a rather bad habit of throwing something stinky at people. Why? Who knows. Best of luck in the contest.
Green Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 12:12 PM
That was funny...you just can't trust those Halloween monkeys. :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 8:43 AM
Lol! ;D Too cute! Good luck in the contest CayCay! xomo
Devonshire Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 6:51 AM
Well, that's an imaginative type of Halloween Horror, Cay Cay! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
Vaso Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 1:13 AM
This is so cute CayCay!!!
Devonshire Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 6:52 AM
Really sorry to hear this actually happened. Your sister probably didn't enjoy Halloween after this experience.
Godwin Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 1:48 AM
Thank you, Arthur. Unfortunately, this one is true. The costumes have been changed and ages, but not to protect the innocent! My poor baby sis! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Blown Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 12:32 AM
verrry interesting...just watched an oldt boris karlof film 'the ape'
Godwin Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 1:46 AM
Old, indeed, but I bet it held your attention. Thanks for commenting, Sand. All the best ... CayCay
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