Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Rhyme

Denied

Denied 





With early sunset, the heart descends,
veils of dusk and inconstant eyes,
Set to return home, but one last flight,
as darkness tears and stains vibrant vibes,
My denied emotions ostensibly pretend.





Written Oct 27th, 2015
© Dr. Upma A. Sharma 
Contest- any sad poem

Awarded 2nd place win


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Teddy Kimathi November 4, 2015 at 3:50 AM Uniformly flowing verse! Congrats for your awesome WIN Dr. Upma! ;-)

Viv Wigley November 4, 2015 at 12:10 AM Congrats on your short but powerful piece, Dr Upma. Viv x

Scott Williams November 3, 2015 at 9:24 PM Well done. Congrats on your win.

Robert Lindley November 3, 2015 at 5:49 PM My friend, congrats on your win with this fine poem!!~

Sandra Haight November 3, 2015 at 4:53 PM Congrats on your win, Dr. Upma. Hugs, Sandra

Caryl Muzzey November 3, 2015 at 2:14 PM A wonderful write Dr. Upma. Congrats on your win, I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Eve Roper November 3, 2015 at 1:54 PM Dr. Upma A. Sharma ,congratulations on your win! Sadness is hard for anyone :'( Hugs Eve

Beautiful Scars November 3, 2015 at 1:15 PM WOW! amazing! Congrats on your well deserved win :) -LU

Skat A November 3, 2015 at 1:06 PM Dr Upma, Congratulations on your Any Sad Poem win. LOVE **SKAT**

Janice Canerdy November 3, 2015 at 8:38 AM Upma, I love your parallel of setting sun to setting heart--very creative. Congratulations on your win. Janice

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 29, 2015 at 4:58 AM Pretending is one great lie, and its a cover up to your own self, indeed its hard and sad one! nice in 5lines!~Olive Eloisa