Denial Casts 1st Stone

hidden seeds are sewn 
                planted inside my poem
               cannot hide what’s known 
            a pattern of strands are shown
          cast away truth ~ now your prone 

By
David Kavanagh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Horsman Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 10:30 PM
Interesting tanka, I see only roots of trouble ahead here. Could be wrong, but the poetry, makes one imagine a picture and that in itself, is worth the read....Stay Safe, David.
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 11:55 PM
All metaphorical Harry, mostly about plain truths, being ignored, and not accepted by vulnerable people, and like you wisely said, can only lead to trouble ahead, I was using the poem as an example of being gaslighted, by manipulators, but you asked the question in your comment, exactly what I always do, but victims won’t do, they find safety in denial, stay safe cheers David
Krutsinger Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 4:51 AM
"a pattern of strands are shown" - lovely, metaphoric and relatable David.
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 5:15 AM
Thanks Caren, how the strands appear and unravel right before our eyes, you see it also, which is great, cheers David
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