Denial

Did you feel my dear poor fate As you denied me the sweet apple I would break down under its weight And at me will laugh the people Did you feel my dear sweet bird As you did not whistle as expected I will no more visit your courtyard And keep off writing feeling neglected We don't know if tomorrow we will be alive Still we do such and such plan with all fervour All along displaying very positive vibe This is the hope, our evergreen encourager Denial is a defense of the psychic self Acquired from many a childhood trauma To tackle minor failures it does help Done excessively it may transfer one to 'luna’ It is best to cast away the needless curtain Make flowers bloom in a garden friendly Stay honest and impartial always for certain Denial we won't have to resort to necessarily ___________________________________________ July 28, 2016 Poetry Contest -DENIAL Sponsor: Julia Ward
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Salehi Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 12:50 AM
It was well written ..... I loved the line " Denial is a defense of the psychic self" so true...
Salehi Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 2:11 AM
Good luck with the contest.......
Gupta Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 1:02 AM
Thank you ..
Trifiatis Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 5:41 AM
A string of beautiful messages and sound advice dear friend, Probir! Well written! Good luck!
Gupta Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 5:51 AM
Thank you ... Regards ...
Y. Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 10:48 AM
Hi Probir, I enjoyed your take on the theme. It was well written piece. And flowed with content and positivity. Good luck in the contest: -) Alexis
Gupta Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 10:54 AM
Thank you Alexis ...
May Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 8:41 AM
Very nicely done Probir...a positive message...
Gupta Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 10:50 AM
Yes, I do understand ... I did read your poem ... Thank you ...
Gupta Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 10:48 AM
Thank you ...
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