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Being in denial is like sitting in an empty house, with a moonlit forest behind it. Coming out of denial is the new bird, that comes and stays a while, with that little empty house, but when winter comes, he is off on a journey from the heavens above.

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Date: 4/24/2009 11:38:00 AM
Interesting perspective leaving the reader with something to ponder. You may want to change journy to journey in the last line. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/22/2009 12:27:00 AM
An interesting point of view, beautifully encased in lovely poetry. Thanks for your kind comments, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 4/9/2009 3:44:00 PM
I love your poems em there fantastice!
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Date: 4/1/2009 8:31:00 PM
Dear Emily, A word of advise Please don't think that I don't LOVE YOUR POEMS because I do You should use spell check journy is journey in YOUR last POEM porciln is Porcelain YOUR chances of winning any SOUP contest are lowered for spelling errors YOUR POEMS are to Good to lose on default LOVE ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/31/2009 7:09:00 PM
Great use of imagery, the contrast of the poem is nice...Raul
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Date: 3/30/2009 10:42:00 AM
The bird adds life to the empty house; too bad he has to leave. Lovely poem, Emily.
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