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Demons Whisper

Demons beyond the veil, whisper to her, Bringing forth dark memories, About the pain in the room. The tears she cried in the cornfield ignored. Her adult life in bondage, to a childhood of fear. That moment in time controls who she is. While the demons pull the strings, And make her play along.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/31/2012 2:08:00 AM
I am impressed by how you fabricated a tremendous story in a few words in this poetry! Congratulations on your win, Christopher! Wow! Second Place! Huuuuuuge! =)
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/31/2012 6:24:00 AM
Thank You!
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Glenn Sentes
Date: 1/31/2012 2:09:00 AM
and thanks for reading my poem and leaving a nice comment. would love to read more of your works.
Date: 1/30/2012 10:17:00 PM
Chris, such a wonderful write, you did an excellent job capturing the moment, a big congratulations on your win, Greg
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/31/2012 6:24:00 AM
Thank you!!
Date: 1/30/2012 10:06:00 AM
Such a profound write Christopher. Enjoyed this very much. Congratulations
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/30/2012 3:30:00 PM
Thank You!!!
Date: 1/30/2012 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "Between Nightmares and Dreams" contest Christopher. Love, Carol
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/30/2012 3:30:00 PM
Thank You!!

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