Demons Dance

Insomnia, methinks, doth stink;
It carts one quickly to the brink
Then yanks those taunting forty winks
And turns them into toss and blinks.

The hell with all those leaping sheep!
My thoughts on them would earn a bleep.
Instead I stare, in darkness deep,
As minutes into hours creep.

The mind, it fills as demons dance
So slumber doesn’t stand a chance,
But as the daylight does advance
They’re gone, without a backward glance.

And then at last, I get to drowse.
The lines smooth out between my brows;
But obligations don’t allow
The time to catch up anyhow.

Another tired day will dawn,
My pillow something I could pawn.
I’ll greet the morning, pale and drawn
And stifle yet another yawn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mcleod Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 1:56 PM
Very good lines. I especially liked "The mind, it fills as demons dance." It makes me think of blurred images when you first fall asleep.
Johnson Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 6:48 PM
I'm so tired that I can't think. Happy passover, might as well drink. :) BTY, This is awesome.
Anish Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 6:10 PM
Interesting. Fortunately I do not suffer from insomnia. My grandmother did and lived to be 95 or so - nothing to worry about. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Peterson Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 12:04 AM
I'd laugh out loud but must rather chuckle because I'm on rather close terms with sleeplessness. You nailed the form and got your message persuasively through. Really enjoyed this one.
Dietrich Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 8:59 PM
geez, I am so silly. Just went to check that one contest and it asked for devil and diamonds in the title. hahaha
Dietrich Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 8:40 PM
excellent witty writing, Ilene.I was not sure what this contest was all about . Maybe I will go look at it again. (it was for that demon contest??)
Sullivan Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 8:50 AM
Fabulous write ilene, can't believe no-one has commented. Made me won't to go back to my bed just brilliant loved it thank you
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