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Demons and Angels

Demons Deliriously dancing, destroying, dehumanizing decent desires Attending adequate, amiable attractive, adoring ambient Angels ...syllable count - 2,19,19,2... April.03.2020 Let the Pens Flow - Antonym Poetry Sponsored by: Jenish Somadas Honorable Mention...Thank You
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Hawkens Avatar
April 18, 2020 at 8:31 AM
Fantastic Alliteration and such creativity in your presentation. Beautifully penned. Congratulations
Dietrich Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 6:09 PM
Can't get over those eyes on the angel/demon!! Back with congrats, WW.
Somadas Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 1:50 AM
Congrats on your placement.. I'm honored to have your entry Winged Warrior..
Labyrinth Avatar
April 9, 2020 at 6:29 AM
mmmm, pools of black, angels may present them there eyes, not demons; but perhaps in some dimensions, angels are demons. It is all lateral and dimensions are immeasurable and unfathomable.
Salehi Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 8:06 PM
Deliverability... Astonishing
Proxenos Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 1:22 AM
The contrast is amazing, the pic. develish and your verse exquisite - ah lush lashes, which i have put onto hold for now - my failing, I love them! Great write Wingster - a win, I am almost sure. Blessings and hugs, Jennster
Dietrich Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 8:05 PM
oooh wow, what a contrast and what a devilish picture with it!!! Great job. so great to hear it read too.
Ashley Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 10:00 AM
My dear bro bro, such a striking contrast is drawn with your deliriously attractive artistry. Beautiful, beguiling imagery! The Unicorns fancy themselves as angels, just because they can fly and they're white.. but I just think they're persnickety and aloof..lol! I hope all is well with you, big bro. Love and hugs.. your adoring lil sis.. Illum <3
Wolf Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 3:24 PM
Love how you've arranged this dazzling delectable to engage the reader's cerebrum! ~ Angel Food - Devil's Cake
Watt Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 1:16 PM
Wings, I always think of angels when I see your name and avatar (not the ones with pretty eyes, the ones with flaming swords, like in the old Frank Peretti novels). Nice write brother, and GL in the contest!
Koplin Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 7:15 AM
Quite interesting poem. Great imagery. I do like it. Great piece of work.
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