Demonic Noise

the voice of god
anger surged in noise
left me in awe

it...

was not God, no
but a thing unknown
shaking the ground

it...was not God

the cat's face changed
her eyes turned dead black
it
cried, "TAKE MY SOUL BACK" 

*For Destroyer ~ Poet 's contest*
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 1:24 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Nature The Destroyer" contest Laura. Love, Carol
Grisetti Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 12:31 PM
Vivid image of the poor cat. Congratulations in the contest.
Brown Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 5:28 AM
Congratulations on your placement in this contest Laura. Love, Carol
Merryman Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 7:34 PM
Congrats on your HM, Laura! Love, Kim
A   Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 10:41 PM
LAURA~.Congratulations ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
Carlson Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 3:04 PM
Good God Girl! - Kyle
Horsman Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 11:29 AM
wow Laura these are superb, good luck in contest. harry
Mister Roboto Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 10:48 PM
I've had a thing for demonized cats ever since the Michael Jackson Thriller video! Thanks for allowing me to have more fun with this phobia/fetish of mine :) jk
Austin Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 1:56 PM
Thanks for reading my stuff, Laura. Amazing about cats, eh. I like the way these Haiku seem to connect, ending very dramatically. Love, daver
Fitzgerald Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 4:24 PM
Much enjoyed Laura best of luck in the contest , Hugs Declan xxx
A   Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 3:17 PM
laura, stopping by to peep on my entries... thank you.. love it.. always, PD ..
Owens Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 1:55 PM
Hey Laura, Very different take on this...very nice...good luck in the contest...Marty
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