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Demonic Noise

tsunami commands mother earth to tremble -- demons unburied blue skies of water pour out devastation -- crashing tears thunder thunderous booms of explosions in aftermath -- resilience conquers By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, March 9, 2012 for Nature the Destroyer contest (PD) first place

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Date: 3/23/2012 1:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Nature The Destroyer" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/23/2012 10:14:00 AM
Rhonda, Congratulations on your win in the contest...Marty
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Date: 3/23/2012 9:00:00 AM
congrats on your win from my wife. Ron.
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Date: 3/16/2012 8:20:00 PM
congrats Rhonda on a dynamic first place win luv.. cool photo..too..
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Date: 3/16/2012 5:48:00 PM
congrats on your deserved 1st place win with this stunning haiku, great use of language and imagery (I love imagery in haiku!) :-)
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Date: 3/16/2012 5:31:00 PM
wow...I love what you painted in words!!!well done<3 sabina
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Date: 3/16/2012 5:07:00 PM
Wow! I can see why you won 1st place with this write. The imagery is fantastic. Congrats on your 1st place win, Rhonda. This is going in my favs. Love, Kim
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Date: 3/16/2012 9:03:00 AM
Images of nature's power and destruction so vivid in these lines of haiku.. and liked how resilience conquers despite all. Many congratulations Rhonda on your well deserved 1st place win. love...
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Date: 3/16/2012 8:26:00 AM
Congrats!
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Date: 3/16/2012 6:13:00 AM
Lovely short writes. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/16/2012 12:28:00 AM
Congratulations, Rhonda, on your 1st prize. Great poem! Love, Maureen
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Date: 3/15/2012 10:24:00 PM
RHONDA~.Congratulations ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
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Date: 3/9/2012 6:58:00 PM
Love this!!!!! Always, Laura
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Date: 3/9/2012 3:14:00 PM
Rhonda, you did as everyone says... outstanding.. or should i say.. all 3 are outrageous... makes me want to hit a tide... I only live 20 minutes from any beach..., stopping by to peep on my entries... thank you.. love it.. always, PD ..
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Date: 3/9/2012 2:30:00 PM
This is a very good entrance for this contest. It flows nicely. Just like the water it talks about.
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Date: 3/9/2012 5:48:00 AM
nice pic and a gr8 write....~sashi
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Date: 3/9/2012 4:09:00 AM
Ahh! Nice shot...lookin' down the barrel of a glassy gun! Ex Surfer here, so I got MADD love for this Hi-Chooooo! Bless you. Gaz00n tighht!
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