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Demolished

who beat me and left me for dead? my back... my arms... my head... the room's sort of spinning this don't feel like winning i think i'll just lie here instead

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Date: 4/27/2022 7:36:00 PM
This gets more and more interesting every time I reread it. (5X so far). At any rate, I guess one should take this lying down. :) gw
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Date: 4/27/2022 5:42:00 AM
there are days when our reality is reduced to feeling all kinds of pain and discomfort. "It's a sign that you're alive," says my mother, in her low psychology.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 4/27/2022 5:55:00 AM
Yeah, I remind myself that there will be no arthritis one day!

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