Demented

Nancy, Dementia rocks n drags ya down, "what am i doing in this bloody town, who is this tart, with a shielas frown, says she loves me, looks fly blown, couldn't be the gal I own, i'm emigrating now-sers" :( Don Johnson Constance La France ` A Rambling Poet ~ Contest Name A Short Poem, Please ~For old Joe the guy that used to know me, in the nursing home~

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John Freeman

Date: 9/3/2011 11:11:00 AM

Smile, cool Don...congratulations on your poem's worthiness. Agape, Moses

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 9/3/2011 10:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!!!-----Lori

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/3/2011 3:18:00 AM

A Fifth Place Win Congratulations. CR

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 9/2/2011 5:43:00 PM

Fine piece,Don.Congratulations on your win.keep it up....

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/2/2011 12:52:00 AM

God bless and congratulations on the win. Well done. Lee

Paul Beadnall

Date: 9/1/2011 4:53:00 PM

Got ya loud n clear ere mate,my stepdad is in early stages, and sisters mother-in-law,died last year after a torrid time. Congrats,Don blessings from Paul

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/1/2011 3:08:00 PM

Hey there Don, congratulations on your win in Constance's contest ;) x

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/1/2011 2:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Constance La France's "A Short Poem, Please" contest Don. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/1/2011 11:51:00 AM

So intense. Congraltulations Don

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/1/2011 11:18:00 AM

Congrats DON on your fantastic win with this profound poetry luv.. nice dedication.. for old Joe..luv..

David Williams

Date: 9/1/2011 11:07:00 AM

hey Don congrats on your win, another cracker mate..David

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/1/2011 10:59:00 AM

Congratulations on the win ,Don

Tony Lane

Date: 8/31/2011 9:58:00 AM

We're going through it with my father-in-law. Tony

Don Johnson
Date: 8/31/2011 6:14:00 PM

Bloody curse the brain steps aside, like in my sperm whale dementia ...rides.. sadly true:(

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/31/2011 9:32:00 AM

Very interesting write Don. Love, Carol

Don Johnson

Date: 8/31/2011 3:48:00 AM

Jumbucks get flyblown, she might be a jumbuck, need a kiwi with some welly boots

Margaret Foster

Date: 8/31/2011 3:36:00 AM

Do you know what town you are in?? Are you sure it's a shiela and not an old jumbuck?? :-) :-) cheers Margaret

Don Johnson
Date: 8/31/2011 7:47:00 AM

I'm In Brisbane, i used to be in west Queensland, been droving with the cattle n the sheep, long time ago. Jumbucks get flyblown, she might be a jumbuck,