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Demented

Nancy,
Dementia rocks n drags ya down,
"what am i doing in this bloody town,
who is this tart, with a shielas frown,
says she loves me, looks fly blown,
couldn't be the gal I own,
i'm emigrating now-sers" :(
Don Johnson


	Constance La France ` A Rambling Poet ~
Contest Name	A Short Poem, Please

~For old Joe the guy that used to know me, in the nursing home~

Copyright © Don Johnson | Year Posted 2011

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John Freeman Date: 9/3/2011 11:11:00 AM Smile, cool Don...congratulations on your poem's worthiness. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Lori Lucas Mcclure Date: 9/3/2011 10:08:00 AM Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!!!-----Lori Login to Reply

Caryl Ramsdale Date: 9/3/2011 3:18:00 AM A Fifth Place Win Congratulations. CR Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 9/2/2011 5:43:00 PM Fine piece,Don.Congratulations on your win.keep it up.... Login to Reply

Lee Ramage Date: 9/2/2011 12:52:00 AM God bless and congratulations on the win. Well done. Lee Login to Reply

Paul Beadnall Date: 9/1/2011 4:53:00 PM Got ya loud n clear ere mate,my stepdad is in early stages, and sisters mother-in-law,died last year after a torrid time. Congrats,Don blessings from Paul Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 9/1/2011 3:08:00 PM Hey there Don, congratulations on your win in Constance's contest ;) x Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/1/2011 2:12:00 PM Congratulations on your placement in Constance La France's "A Short Poem, Please" contest Don. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 9/1/2011 11:51:00 AM So intense. Congraltulations Don Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/1/2011 11:18:00 AM Congrats DON on your fantastic win with this profound poetry luv.. nice dedication.. for old Joe..luv.. Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 9/1/2011 11:07:00 AM hey Don congrats on your win, another cracker mate..David Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/1/2011 10:59:00 AM Congratulations on the win ,Don Login to Reply

Tony Lane Date: 8/31/2011 9:58:00 AM We're going through it with my father-in-law. Tony Login to Reply Don Johnson Date: 8/31/2011 6:14:00 PM Bloody curse the brain steps aside, like in my sperm whale dementia ...rides.. sadly true:(

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/31/2011 9:32:00 AM Very interesting write Don. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Don Johnson Date: 8/31/2011 3:48:00 AM Jumbucks get flyblown, she might be a jumbuck, need a kiwi with some welly boots Login to Reply

Margaret Foster Date: 8/31/2011 3:36:00 AM Do you know what town you are in?? Are you sure it's a shiela and not an old jumbuck?? :-) :-) cheers Margaret Login to Reply Don Johnson Date: 8/31/2011 7:47:00 AM I'm In Brisbane, i used to be in west Queensland, been droving with the cattle n the sheep, long time ago. Jumbucks get flyblown, she might be a jumbuck,