Don Johnson Poet Rhyme

Demented

Nancy,
Dementia rocks n drags ya down,
"what am i doing in this bloody town,
who is this tart, with a shielas frown,
says she loves me, looks fly blown,
couldn't be the gal I own,
i'm emigrating now-sers" :(
Don Johnson


	Constance La France ` A Rambling Poet ~
Contest Name	A Short Poem, Please

~For old Joe the guy that used to know me, in the nursing home~

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John Freeman September 3, 2011 at 11:11 AM Smile, cool Don...congratulations on your poem's worthiness. Agape, Moses

Lori Lucas Mcclure September 3, 2011 at 10:08 AM Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!!!-----Lori

Caryl Ramsdale September 3, 2011 at 3:18 AM A Fifth Place Win Congratulations. CR

Olusegun Arowolo September 2, 2011 at 5:43 PM Fine piece,Don.Congratulations on your win.keep it up....

Lee Ramage September 2, 2011 at 12:52 AM God bless and congratulations on the win. Well done. Lee

Paul Beadnall September 1, 2011 at 4:53 PM Got ya loud n clear ere mate,my stepdad is in early stages, and sisters mother-in-law,died last year after a torrid time. Congrats,Don blessings from Paul

Wilma Neels September 1, 2011 at 3:08 PM Hey there Don, congratulations on your win in Constance's contest ;) x

Carol Sunshine Brown September 1, 2011 at 2:12 PM Congratulations on your placement in Constance La France's "A Short Poem, Please" contest Don. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson September 1, 2011 at 11:51 AM So intense. Congraltulations Don

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 1, 2011 at 11:18 AM Congrats DON on your fantastic win with this profound poetry luv.. nice dedication.. for old Joe..luv..

David Williams September 1, 2011 at 11:07 AM hey Don congrats on your win, another cracker mate..David

Dr.Ram Mehta September 1, 2011 at 10:59 AM Congratulations on the win ,Don

Tony Lane August 31, 2011 at 9:58 AM We're going through it with my father-in-law. Tony Don Johnson August 31, 2011 at 6:14 PM Bloody curse the brain steps aside, like in my sperm whale dementia ...rides.. sadly true:(

Carol Sunshine Brown August 31, 2011 at 9:32 AM Very interesting write Don. Love, Carol

Don Johnson August 31, 2011 at 3:48 AM Jumbucks get flyblown, she might be a jumbuck, need a kiwi with some welly boots

Margaret Foster August 31, 2011 at 3:36 AM Do you know what town you are in?? Are you sure it's a shiela and not an old jumbuck?? :-) :-) cheers Margaret Don Johnson August 31, 2011 at 7:47 AM I'm In Brisbane, i used to be in west Queensland, been droving with the cattle n the sheep, long time ago. Jumbucks get flyblown, she might be a jumbuck,