Notes About The Poem

outward behaviour or bearing.

Demeanour

Distinct and upright for maturity to be in diaper
Eyes replacing lips, saying words more than that of a rapper
Mouth closes itself, only to open and speak when proper
Emits that sense of certainty that he will surely prosper
All acquaintances want to maintain this link and dig deeper
No serious knowledge of this being who gives free mental supper
On each mind, his charisma and infective aura pamper
Under his feet are prints sensed by many to heal a leper
Reputation, taste and class, far beyond just being on paper
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Canerdy Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 9:31 PM
Thought-provoking piece about Jesus, Funom! Janice
Makama Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 10:05 AM
Thank you Janice... Thank you very much
Horsman Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 4:08 PM
Amazing poetry, Funom, so pleased to be reading you again..
Makama Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 10:01 AM
Heeeeey! My lovely friend Harry... Thank you very much.
La France Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 11:14 AM
Funom, keep working on your Acrostics, you are doing well ~
Makama Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 9:59 AM
Thank you very much Dear Heart
Marine Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 2:32 AM
True Integrity : heart, mind, actions , all in a straight line- to be learned from. As Andea pointed out- acoustic week, read them all- I find it fascinating how they can be formulated. Not that easy. Much enjoyed!
Makama Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 9:53 AM
Thank you so much Aqua Marine... Your words are kind
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 5:42 PM
NIce one, Funom. I see you are REALLY into acrostics this week! let me see one more.
Makama Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 9:52 AM
Thank you so much Andrea
Roper Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 1:03 PM
well said, Funom
Makama Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 9:52 AM
Thank you so much Eve
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December 7, 2018 at 10:02 AM
And an awe inspiring demeanor our Lord has! He lights are candles so we can shine his smile and healing to the nations! Blessings to you, dear Poet!
Makama Avatar
December 22, 2018 at 9:50 AM
Yes my deat Kim, thank you so much for your comment
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