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Demands of Love

Valley of flowers 
And rainbows isn’t my abode
Share if you may
The thorns of my anguish
And be the balm of my wounds

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Sara Kendrick

November 29, 2012 at 12:57 PM

Reads like one has experienced a bad time or just can do a very good job or writing about it..Enjoyed reading your creative work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for you presence at my work...Sara

Mohammad Yamin

November 30, 2012 at 1:34 PM

Thanks for your enlightened comments. Life, Sara, is not a bed of roses. More often it passes through bad times. There is no dearth of companions of good times. One must look for that gem that gliters in the dark. Regards.

Andrea Dietrich

November 11, 2012 at 11:24 AM

I love the sentiment of this one.

Mohammad Yamin

November 30, 2012 at 1:07 PM

I admire your comments. Thank you.

Harry Horsman

November 10, 2012 at 2:06 AM

again wonderful philosophy, awesome poem...

Mohammad Yamin

November 30, 2012 at 12:55 PM

Thanks Harry for your heart warming comments on my Tanka

Vicky Tsiluma

November 10, 2012 at 1:53 AM

Very well written Mohammad! I love it - the theme, the cleverly mixed phrases, the flow -Well done!

Mohammad Yamin

November 30, 2012 at 12:33 PM

Thanks for visiting my Tanka and for your heart warming comments.

Poet Destroyer A

November 9, 2012 at 8:15 PM

Mohammad, a deep tanka, , thank you for sharing your poem, always :-) PD

Mohammad Yamin

November 29, 2012 at 6:43 PM

Thanks for your kind appreciation, PD. Your comments are always charming. Have a nice day.

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 9, 2012 at 12:05 PM

A writer of all, a master of none but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Mohammad. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Mohammad Yamin

November 29, 2012 at 6:33 PM

Thanks for your kind comments. Modesty is your virtue Carol. You inspire others to write. How sweet of you.