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Those Dreams Making demands Stark unreality Doors stay closed~windows open wide Nightmares

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Date: 5/27/2015 8:07:00 AM
Sara, this is a splendid Cinquain, I like the feel of this form, must try it, note to self, and well your words are entrancing, an impressive 7 from me and thanks so much for visiting my jingle poem . . .
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Date: 5/25/2015 9:18:00 AM
Sara, short lines yet draw much!!! :)! nicely done... !~olive eloisa :)
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Date: 5/25/2015 8:46:00 AM
By bizarre coincidence I've been having dreams of "stark unreality" lately? Your profound poem says it all. Thank you for stopping by to read my humor. / M
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Date: 5/25/2015 6:38:00 AM
That's the way it goes; well penned.
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Date: 5/24/2015 10:43:00 AM
I like how the dreams became nightmares. I mean, the way you did it. I sure don't like when that happens!!
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Date: 5/24/2015 7:34:00 AM
- A restless night - Skillfully written with few words, Sara - Enjoy the rest of the weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/24/2015 3:05:00 AM
Wow Sara how amazing is this sweet lil write! Great work my dear friend!
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Date: 5/23/2015 11:56:00 PM
Sara, Deep and amazing... SK
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