Demanding Dreams

Those Dreams
Making demands
Stark unreality
Doors stay closed~windows open wide
Nightmares

dreamcinquain

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Constance La France

May 27, 2015 at 8:07 AM

Sara, this is a splendid Cinquain, I like the feel of this form, must try it, note to self, and well your words are entrancing, an impressive 7 from me and thanks so much for visiting my jingle poem . . .

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

May 25, 2015 at 9:18 AM

Sara, short lines yet draw much!!! :)! nicely done... !~olive eloisa :)

Maurice Rigoler

May 25, 2015 at 8:46 AM

By bizarre coincidence I've been having dreams of "stark unreality" lately? Your profound poem says it all. Thank you for stopping by to read my humor. / M