Deluge

Measured day begins
Misty pools create cascade
Before mornings break
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 21, 2010 at 11:50 AM
Nice use of imagery and alliteration. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing!! Karen
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February 21, 2010 at 11:23 AM
nicley penned, enjoyed also.
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February 20, 2010 at 4:12 PM
An interesting way of seeing the picture, Cecil. Imaginative! Luv, andrea
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February 20, 2010 at 3:24 PM
I enjoyed this ...good luck in the contest..I think you will do well. BG
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February 20, 2010 at 2:11 PM
Great write that should be in the winner's circle. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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