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::Delta Forces::

washing away waves
    rivers aneal wretched seas
          ablution flows free

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David Kavanagh

allusionforgivenessnaturehaiku

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Jennifer Proxenos

November 13, 2021 at 11:38 PM

This poem is accurate and so clever Exactly what happens here David - our oceans in South AFRICA ARE BECOMING POLLUTED, AND OF COURSE THE INTENSE AMOUNT OF RUBBISH Collected BY THE WATER WHICH IS THROWN IN BY HUMANS, AGGRAVATES AN ALREADY BAD SITUATION. SORRY THAT i BROKE INTO CAPS, DO THIS OFTEN. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

David Kavanagh

November 14, 2021 at 12:59 AM

Caps are fine Jennifer, this one is kind of ironic, the chances of pristine rivers cleansing the ocean are pretty much remote, human pollution pervades in most bodies of water, as you said aggravating an already bad situation, we can only hope it will be rectified by us pretty soon, cheers David

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