Delivery

A living poem, not yet written,
not yet visible, haunts the periphery
of the inner eye.

She is as light as a feather,
though she has a deep-set gravity,
her presence impels my mind toward her.

Which way to seek?
The poem that is not yet created
is a womb both empty and full,
its potential
demands subservience.

A dark machinery makes love,
to the unsubstantial,
and one single insight is born,

from that seed within a seed,
she nakedly comes,
now you must dress her.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Marine Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 1:40 PM
Hi Eric, love this: "She is light as a feather, though she has deep-set gravity," - a thoughtful, beautifully crafted poem about a poems conception, and creative construction. And it's delivery. Looking forward to reading more of your work!
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January 2, 2024 at 8:14 AM
Thank you, Aqua Marine, your review of this is most insightful and most welcome. All the very best E
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