Cecil Hickman Poet Choka

Delivering Nature

Creatures of nature
Nature’s creations of life
Deliver ingeniously
Call of the crow slow
Disappearing in a mist
Reappearing once again
Whipple wills whistle
Loud to soft they continue
Near but far they speak sharply
Wind flowing constant
Every direction then
Lazily departing up
Raindrops heartedly
Drift silently until stopped
Creating wondrous quick sounds
Bees flying so low
Flutter erratically
Creating sizzling humming

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Cesar Cantu May 27, 2009 at 11:44 PM Nature in the lower grounds, micro-universe, so nice C= a morning poem for me jojo thanks for sharing wiii =D and for the experience

Nadia Shahwan May 20, 2009 at 10:26 AM Beautiful choka here. "Find here ingeniously" if corrected so...will be 7 cyl. and "In every direction them"..7cyl. and "Creating wondrous quick soft sound"..7cyl. Pleeeeeeeeeease re-enty this beautiful choka. It's thrilling.

Carolyn Devonshire May 12, 2009 at 10:49 PM Soup Mail!

Lena Townsend May 1, 2009 at 12:12 AM A wonderful picture of nature your paint here friend. Great writing. Great luck to you in the contest. Smiles from Lolita

Carolyn Devonshire April 30, 2009 at 2:31 PM You "deliver nature" on a platter filled with wonderous sights and sounds, Cecil! Surely, "Near but far they speak sharply" in your great poem. Love your work, Cecil.

Raul Moreno April 30, 2009 at 10:18 AM Thanks for supporting my contest Cecil...Raul

Brian Strand April 30, 2009 at 7:41 AM You have done so Cecil in this dlight-filled poem.Rgds Brian

Carrie Richards April 30, 2009 at 7:08 AM Great job, can hear the sound of nature in this wonderful Choka! music to my ears! ~ Carrie