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Delivering Nature

Creatures of nature
Nature’s creations of life
Deliver ingeniously
Call of the crow slow
Disappearing in a mist
Reappearing once again
Whipple wills whistle
Loud to soft they continue
Near but far they speak sharply
Wind flowing constant
Every direction then
Lazily departing up
Raindrops heartedly
Drift silently until stopped
Creating wondrous quick sounds
Bees flying so low
Flutter erratically
Creating sizzling humming

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/27/2009 11:44:00 PM
Nature in the lower grounds, micro-universe, so nice C= a morning poem for me jojo thanks for sharing wiii =D and for the experience
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Date: 5/20/2009 10:26:00 AM
Beautiful choka here. "Find here ingeniously" if corrected so...will be 7 cyl. and "In every direction them"..7cyl. and "Creating wondrous quick soft sound"..7cyl. Pleeeeeeeeeease re-enty this beautiful choka. It's thrilling.
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Date: 5/12/2009 10:49:00 PM
Soup Mail!
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Date: 5/1/2009 12:12:00 AM
A wonderful picture of nature your paint here friend. Great writing. Great luck to you in the contest. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/30/2009 2:31:00 PM
You "deliver nature" on a platter filled with wonderous sights and sounds, Cecil! Surely, "Near but far they speak sharply" in your great poem. Love your work, Cecil.
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Date: 4/30/2009 10:18:00 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest Cecil...Raul
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Date: 4/30/2009 7:41:00 AM
You have done so Cecil in this dlight-filled poem.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/30/2009 7:08:00 AM
Great job, can hear the sound of nature in this wonderful Choka! music to my ears! ~ Carrie
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