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Delivering Nature

Creatures of nature Nature’s creations of life Deliver ingeniously Call of the crow slow Disappearing in a mist Reappearing once again Whipple wills whistle Loud to soft they continue Near but far they speak sharply Wind flowing constant Every direction then Lazily departing up Raindrops heartedly Drift silently until stopped Creating wondrous quick sounds Bees flying so low Flutter erratically Creating sizzling humming

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Cesar Cantu

Date: 5/27/2009 11:44:00 PM

Nature in the lower grounds, micro-universe, so nice C= a morning poem for me jojo thanks for sharing wiii =D and for the experience

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 5/20/2009 10:26:00 AM

Beautiful choka here. "Find here ingeniously" if corrected so...will be 7 cyl. and "In every direction them"..7cyl. and "Creating wondrous quick soft sound"..7cyl. Pleeeeeeeeeease re-enty this beautiful choka. It's thrilling.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/12/2009 10:49:00 PM

Soup Mail!

Lena Townsend

Date: 5/1/2009 12:12:00 AM

A wonderful picture of nature your paint here friend. Great writing. Great luck to you in the contest. Smiles from Lolita

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/30/2009 2:31:00 PM

You "deliver nature" on a platter filled with wonderous sights and sounds, Cecil! Surely, "Near but far they speak sharply" in your great poem. Love your work, Cecil.

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/30/2009 10:18:00 AM

Thanks for supporting my contest Cecil...Raul

Brian Strand

Date: 4/30/2009 7:41:00 AM

You have done so Cecil in this dlight-filled poem.Rgds Brian

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/30/2009 7:08:00 AM

Great job, can hear the sound of nature in this wonderful Choka! music to my ears! ~ Carrie