Deliverance

Before you read the following poem, please read the first part of this poem that I have posted on this website separately.


"Deliverance" by M. Taha Effendi (Didactic) Oh mortal! Do not be sad, I know it hurts to wait. Have patience, you will be glad, to learn what's in your fate. I know you love her dearly, but to lose her is a test. And now is just too early, for you to know whats best. Be patient, do not worry. And do not act in haste. Fruits eaten in hurry carry a bitter taste. Be not troubled by your past, for you will smile tomorrow. Though happiness will never last, I am here to heal your sorrow. To take a life is murder, even if it is your own. With death you two will be farther, than when you are alone. You both will live on; miles apart, though your love will never end. Time will heal your broken heart, Your life, patience will mend. I know this love you can't forget but just live life by my rule there is a life after death that to ignore you'd be a fool you will know if you are wise, I do not comfort with lies. For there is a place called paradise, where you will finally claim your prize.
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Kendrick Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 2:21 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work this afternoon..I am glad that I chose this one to read..Paradise is an end prize that we all desire..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Effendi Avatar
November 5, 2011 at 11:00 PM
This ones a real treat. As you must be aware, I have also written a reply to the prequal to this one. Your's is definitely better.
Wesley Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 5:52 PM
Ahhhhhh! Can it get any better? So sublime, the story, the rhyme -I find rest in the best and your verse is all one could ask for. Such talent!
Yamin Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 1:15 PM
A good poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for your appreciation of my Ghazal The Stranger. For full reply please go back to my Ghazal the Stranger,
Maverick Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 12:53 PM
just enjoyed good to read, taha
Effendi Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 12:07 AM
Readers please don't forget to rate my poem:) Thanks
Effendi Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 12:05 AM
Thank u so much Liz:)
Nubani Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 9:54 AM
nice write :)
Effendi Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 1:55 PM
Just what the doctor ordered:) Thanks doctor Mehta. This is not merely poetry. One does indeed find solace and eternal peace if he leaves his life to the will of God.
Mehta Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 5:29 AM
Very awesome and inspiring thought you have penned so well, wo do get comfort when in paradise if there is such one, Taha
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