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Deliverance

Before you read the following poem, please read the first part of this poem that I have posted on this website separately.
"Deliverance" by M. Taha Effendi (Didactic) Oh mortal! Do not be sad, I know it hurts to wait. Have patience, you will be glad, to learn what's in your fate. I know you love her dearly, but to lose her is a test. And now is just too early, for you to know whats best. Be patient, do not worry. And do not act in haste. Fruits eaten in hurry carry a bitter taste. Be not troubled by your past, for you will smile tomorrow. Though happiness will never last, I am here to heal your sorrow. To take a life is murder, even if it is your own. With death you two will be farther, than when you are alone. You both will live on; miles apart, though your love will never end. Time will heal your broken heart, Your life, patience will mend. I know this love you can't forget but just live life by my rule there is a life after death that to ignore you'd be a fool you will know if you are wise, I do not comfort with lies. For there is a place called paradise, where you will finally claim your prize.

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Date: 1/6/2012 2:21:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work this afternoon..I am glad that I chose this one to read..Paradise is an end prize that we all desire..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 11/5/2011 11:00:00 PM
This ones a real treat. As you must be aware, I have also written a reply to the prequal to this one. Your's is definitely better.
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Date: 9/23/2011 5:52:00 PM
Ahhhhhh! Can it get any better? So sublime, the story, the rhyme -I find rest in the best and your verse is all one could ask for. Such talent!
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Date: 9/13/2011 1:15:00 PM
A good poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for your appreciation of my Ghazal The Stranger. For full reply please go back to my Ghazal the Stranger,
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Date: 10/26/2010 12:53:00 PM
just enjoyed good to read, taha
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Date: 10/19/2010 12:07:00 AM
Readers please don't forget to rate my poem:) Thanks
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Date: 10/19/2010 12:05:00 AM
Thank u so much Liz:)
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Date: 10/17/2010 9:54:00 AM
nice write :)
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Date: 10/13/2010 1:55:00 PM
Just what the doctor ordered:) Thanks doctor Mehta. This is not merely poetry. One does indeed find solace and eternal peace if he leaves his life to the will of God.
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Date: 10/13/2010 5:29:00 AM
Very awesome and inspiring thought you have penned so well, wo do get comfort when in paradise if there is such one, Taha
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