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Deliverance

Pounding waves crashing Enter waters edge dancing Cool and inviting Powerful torrent pulling downward to sleep eternal

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/12/2012 5:49:00 PM
Great visual! Loved it!~Tammy~
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Date: 10/17/2010 9:04:00 AM
love it
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Date: 10/8/2010 8:23:00 PM
Great Tanks, Sharon. Was it deliberate to put the first line to the left? It could be the waves over there and the edge of the water is where we read the rest of the poem! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/8/2010 3:05:00 PM
Nice poem.Very mysterious.One of my favorites.Keep it up.Love,Jamecia
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