Deliverance

Pounding waves crashing Enter waters edge dancing Cool and inviting Powerful torrent pulling downward to sleep eternal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Flanagan Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 5:49 PM
Great visual! Loved it!~Tammy~
Chappell Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 9:04 AM
love it
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 8:23 PM
Great Tanks, Sharon. Was it deliberate to put the first line to the left? It could be the waves over there and the edge of the water is where we read the rest of the poem! Luv, Andrea
Buggs Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 3:05 PM
Nice poem.Very mysterious.One of my favorites.Keep it up.Love,Jamecia
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