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Delirium Dust

Delirium Dust In the corner of my room you’ll find many a decentralizing delirium dust Where my mind does consume peripheral visions of malevolent distrust Deprivations that entomb metabolic disturbances of cunning combust Temporal lesions loom of psychotic disorders in a state of thriving thrust I see you but can not touch thru nociceptive nightmares nurturing night Hallucinogens that will crutch frantic neurons paleocortical penal plight I feel you but can not clutch a dimensional dementia in a demons fright Denunciative delusions a monstrous much external images in fetal flight I sense you but can not taste chemoreceptic catacombs a pernicious smell Stimuli distortions of waste proprioceptors penetrating the gates of hell The love I give is displaced impalpable illusions within a condemned cell The love received defaced from a schizophrenic defamatory defunct dwell. March/11/2018 Hallucination Sponsored by: Brendan J. Simons

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 3/23/2018 8:15:00 PM

Warm regards and congrats on a well-deserved win, W2 - blessings as always, my friend! :-)

Eve Roper

Date: 3/23/2018 12:40:00 PM

^WW^, nicely done verse & great imagery.. Congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve ~`*

John Hamilton

Date: 3/22/2018 9:19:00 AM

As always your distinctive style stands out, alliteration and internal rhyme, I have to admit this is way over my head, your medical terms remind me of a time and place I'd rather forget. Congrats on a mesmerizing win!

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/22/2018 10:01:00 AM

Thank you so much, Lyric Man...^WW^

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/22/2018 8:21:00 AM

Congrats on your top win, WW. Superb.

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/22/2018 10:00:00 AM

Thank you, so much Line...^WW^

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 3/22/2018 3:25:00 AM

Very powerful. Congratulations. The blend of big medical words and underlying chemical reason blend well with all that real emotion. Thank you for sharing, Kai

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/22/2018 9:59:00 AM

Thank you so much, Kai...^WW^

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/21/2018 12:54:00 PM

WW, this is such an amazing poem with your wonderful gift of language and imagery used to portray the theme! Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/22/2018 9:59:00 AM

Thank you so much, my dear friend, Sandra...^WW^

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/21/2018 10:48:00 AM

Wow.......one would need a science degree to write this poem, I would think? Or a gift of language! A lot of work put into this one!! Congrats to you!!

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/22/2018 9:58:00 AM

Thank you so much, Carrie...^WW^

B.J. Fitz

Date: 3/20/2018 11:49:00 PM

I want to thank you for entering my contest and congratulate you on your win! It was a tough contest to judge which is why there were multiple first placers. I really enjoyed your piece due to its strong cryptic language riddled th science, which is one of my favorite ways to write poetry about such content! Well done!

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/22/2018 9:58:00 AM

Thank you Brendan...thankz for having me and placement...^WW^

Akkina Downing

Date: 3/15/2018 2:06:00 PM

WOW!!! It's all I'm saying... Ok adding a little more :) BRILLIANTLY done! A white smile my dear :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/22/2018 9:56:00 AM

Thank you, my dear friend, Akkina...^WW^

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/13/2018 9:31:00 AM

This is brilliant, ^WW^:) Great use of alliterative expressions:)

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/22/2018 9:55:00 AM

Thank you, Jo...^WW^

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 3/12/2018 6:20:00 PM

Wow! WW, I am rendered speechless by this creative and unique write. Awesome! I felt like I lived my older sister's 1960s Lol.

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/22/2018 9:55:00 AM

Thank you, my dear friend, Rhoda...^WW^

Joseph May

Date: 3/12/2018 2:07:00 PM

Very well expressed WW..

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/22/2018 9:53:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph...^WW^

Silent One

Date: 3/12/2018 7:42:00 AM

Great poem WW...

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/22/2018 9:52:00 AM

Thank you, my Silent friend...^WW^

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/12/2018 7:22:00 AM

Wow ..WW, this is an amazing poem for the contest . Well done :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/22/2018 9:51:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi my friend...^WW^

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/12/2018 6:59:00 AM

As always, you're a master at alliterations, ^WW^. And now I need to go get my dictionary :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/22/2018 9:51:00 AM

Thank you, Agnes...^WW^

Maria Williams

Date: 3/11/2018 11:44:00 PM

A great take on the state of the mind in your inimitable internal verse style my dear friend WW and so representative of a troubled mind. You description is perfect. Thankfully I have not experienced that condition. All the best for the contest. I must give this a Fave...Maria

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/22/2018 9:50:00 AM

Thank you, my dear friend...^WW^

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/11/2018 10:43:00 PM

I felt I time traveled, great write!!

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/22/2018 9:49:00 AM

Thank you Arthur...^WW^