Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

Delirium Dust

Delirium Dust


In the corner of my room you’ll find many a decentralizing delirium dust
Where my mind does consume peripheral visions of malevolent distrust
Deprivations that entomb metabolic disturbances of cunning combust
Temporal lesions loom of psychotic disorders in a state of thriving thrust

I see you but can not touch thru nociceptive nightmares nurturing night
Hallucinogens that will crutch frantic neurons paleocortical penal plight
I feel you but can not clutch a dimensional dementia in a demons fright
Denunciative delusions a monstrous much external images in fetal flight

I sense you but can not taste chemoreceptic catacombs a pernicious smell
Stimuli distortions of waste proprioceptors penetrating the gates of hell
The love I give is displaced impalpable illusions within a condemned cell
The love received defaced from a schizophrenic defamatory defunct dwell.




March/11/2018
Hallucination
Sponsored by: Brendan J. Simons

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Gregory Richard Barden March 23, 2018 at 8:15 PM Warm regards and congrats on a well-deserved win, W2 - blessings as always, my friend! :-)

Eve Roper March 23, 2018 at 12:40 PM ^WW^, nicely done verse & great imagery.. Congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve ~`*

John Hamilton March 22, 2018 at 9:19 AM As always your distinctive style stands out, alliteration and internal rhyme, I have to admit this is way over my head, your medical terms remind me of a time and place I'd rather forget. Congrats on a mesmerizing win! Winged Warrior March 22, 2018 at 10:01 AM Thank you so much, Lyric Man...^WW^

Line Gauthier March 22, 2018 at 8:21 AM Congrats on your top win, WW. Superb. Winged Warrior March 22, 2018 at 10:00 AM Thank you, so much Line...^WW^

Kai Michael Neumann March 22, 2018 at 3:25 AM Very powerful. Congratulations. The blend of big medical words and underlying chemical reason blend well with all that real emotion. Thank you for sharing, Kai Winged Warrior March 22, 2018 at 9:59 AM Thank you so much, Kai...^WW^

Sandra Haight March 21, 2018 at 12:54 PM WW, this is such an amazing poem with your wonderful gift of language and imagery used to portray the theme! Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra Winged Warrior March 22, 2018 at 9:59 AM Thank you so much, my dear friend, Sandra...^WW^

Carrie Richards March 21, 2018 at 10:48 AM Wow.......one would need a science degree to write this poem, I would think? Or a gift of language! A lot of work put into this one!! Congrats to you!! Winged Warrior March 22, 2018 at 9:58 AM Thank you so much, Carrie...^WW^

Akkina Downing March 15, 2018 at 2:06 PM WOW!!! It's all I'm saying... Ok adding a little more :) BRILLIANTLY done! A white smile my dear :) Winged Warrior March 22, 2018 at 9:56 AM Thank you, my dear friend, Akkina...^WW^

Joanna Daniel March 13, 2018 at 9:31 AM This is brilliant, ^WW^:) Great use of alliterative expressions:) Winged Warrior March 22, 2018 at 9:55 AM Thank you, Jo...^WW^

Rhoda Tripp March 12, 2018 at 6:20 PM Wow! WW, I am rendered speechless by this creative and unique write. Awesome! I felt like I lived my older sister's 1960s Lol. Winged Warrior March 22, 2018 at 9:55 AM Thank you, my dear friend, Rhoda...^WW^

Joseph May March 12, 2018 at 2:07 PM Very well expressed WW.. Winged Warrior March 22, 2018 at 9:53 AM Thank you, Joseph...^WW^

Silent One March 12, 2018 at 7:42 AM Great poem WW... Winged Warrior March 22, 2018 at 9:52 AM Thank you, my Silent friend...^WW^

Heidi Sands March 12, 2018 at 7:22 AM Wow ..WW, this is an amazing poem for the contest . Well done :) Winged Warrior March 22, 2018 at 9:51 AM Thank you, Heidi my friend...^WW^

Agnes Krampe March 12, 2018 at 6:59 AM As always, you're a master at alliterations, ^WW^. And now I need to go get my dictionary :) Winged Warrior March 22, 2018 at 9:51 AM Thank you, Agnes...^WW^

Maria Williams March 11, 2018 at 11:44 PM A great take on the state of the mind in your inimitable internal verse style my dear friend WW and so representative of a troubled mind. You description is perfect. Thankfully I have not experienced that condition. All the best for the contest. I must give this a Fave...Maria Winged Warrior March 22, 2018 at 9:50 AM Thank you, my dear friend...^WW^

Arthur Vaso March 11, 2018 at 10:43 PM I felt I time traveled, great write!! Winged Warrior March 22, 2018 at 9:49 AM Thank you Arthur...^WW^