Delirium

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Yes, if you see a theme on my last two poems...sleepy today! :)

DELIRIUM Spectacular is the sea-saw* ship Serendipitous sleep on its bow Saturated in happiness dreaming Splendiferous sashay of delirium 10/6/2017

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/7/2017 9:48:00 AM

Sweet dreamy poetry, Kim. I love alliteration poetry ... it takes master poet skills to rip-rhyme within a consonant confine. This splendiferous poem got me musing deliriously. Wonderful poetry! Love and hugs always.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/7/2017 9:52:00 AM

Thanks so much, dear Freddie! Glad you enjoyed! :) Hugs Kim