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Delirium I stepped in yesterdays cold that babbled through a rosed mist, its clammy waters rallied the shallows that suffer skin to clinch flesh in curbed shriveling crimps, Shapes a glacial sheath paired amongst innocence, roughly stays offbeat, occasions a past, Coupling realms of diverse remnants, same as wavering opinions, inducing banks overflowing, frigid blight realized, A duality morphed as a single organism, cells bobbing well against a skeletal chamber, wherein, the upper region of unswerving senses, uniquely contrast, yet settled in their unsettling way of indivisibility, Tug-of-war eternally plays, yes or no wobbles on a scheming balancing beam, and juggling is being skillfully played whilst illusion rules consciousness, botched mayhem willingly flaps, till it fancies its place, The chaos that further perplexes a cranium, where atop beams heavenly pivoting light that gleams then glows, bestowing its energetic love, diligent patience flashes yon, awakening a wholesomeness, albeit, temporarily inclined, cognizant vicissitudes parts among us and resonates --an instant warmth. 2020 July 16 *4th Place* Delirium ~~Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 8/1/2020 11:59:00 PM
Wow! This is splendid William. Brilliant, subtle, painting caricatures of conflicting emotions and bringing warmth. Congratulations on your win my friend :)
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William Kekaula
Date: 8/2/2020 12:10:00 AM
Easy on the eyes of the knowledgeable, Aditi, and your precious time is of note, thank you my friend, Aloha! William
Date: 7/19/2020 7:42:00 PM
Excellent poem, William:-) This looks like a top winner to me!
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Date: 7/19/2020 10:07:00 PM
A hearty thanks, Edward, thank you -- Aloha~@William
Date: 7/19/2020 12:58:00 PM
This marvel is perfect for the contest William. I hope it scores high! Blessings xxoo
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William Kekaula
Date: 7/19/2020 1:06:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Connie, adding your gracious bright words to our unmatched Hilo sun~~and ensuing heat, ugh! -- Aloha~@William
Date: 7/17/2020 3:31:00 AM
Your word choices are remarkable, but the combination of words is amazing; stunning, kind of brilliant actually Kai.
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Date: 7/19/2020 1:02:00 PM
Your heart places righteously, Caren, bestowing kind words that is well-intended -- Aloha~@William