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Like whirlwind from my dusk edge you surged in my garden where flowers bloomed with my tinged dreams, fondly. In squall blast petals dispersed torn with fluff of crushed dreams, yet I felt so complete, floating dazed in delirium drift.
May 25, 2020 Syllable count : 3/4/2/4/5/3/2/3/2/3/3/5/6/1/5 Contest : Pick A Title, Vol 18 - Yalto 2 Sponsor : Edward Ibeh June 8, 2020 Contest : Brian's Select 9 Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Date: 6/8/2020 6:04:00 PM
Adrift in a whirlwind. Beautiful Subimal! I am back to congratulate you on your wonderful second placement! xxoo
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Date: 6/8/2020 1:59:00 PM
Congratulations Sublimal. Per usual your images are a "delirium drift." Crushed but complete wonderful opposing images.
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Date: 6/8/2020 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Subimal. You painted delirium in a different view and it is gorgeous.
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Date: 6/7/2020 1:56:00 PM
- Congratulations on your well deserved 2nd place in the Yalto contest, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/7/2020 6:35:00 AM
Awesome poetry, Subimal:-) Enjoyed it. Congratulations on your podium finish!
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